Reviews for That muted sort of longing |
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Belinde Maline chapter 6 . 7/23/2003 excellent chapter as always. I almost wish I could have found this story have it had been completed, that way I could have the pleasure of reading it from beginning to end without waiting for the next chapter to come along. if I didn't know any better it almost sounded as if dean was a bit interested in ginny at quidditch practice. harry's conversation with Ginny in the library made is sound as if he was miffed that ginny was concerned with lupin's well being, sounding almost jealous because her focus was on another male reguardless to who that male would be. until next time. . . |
Sparkle chapter 6 . 7/23/2003 hehe! amazing of course! i luv this ch, especially the remus adn tonks. r they together? i couldnt tell for sure. i luv them, my fav after ginny and harry! pls keep writing adn update soon. this is really good, adn really well written. |
tabula rasa2 chapter 6 . 7/23/2003 Oh my. Just when I thought you were going into a certain direction, you pull things around again - and turn this story into something even more beautiful than I could have imagined. Chapter 5 was brilliant. Ginny's encounter with Lupin was touching, and her scenes with Harry had me all giddy and delighted - oh, that boy is hooked! ;) Anyway, thank you for posting this chapter this week - I'm so glad I still got to read it - I would have seriously missed something. :) |
tabula rasa2 chapter 5 . 7/21/2003 Ok, I've liked the first version of this story well enough - but please don't be offended when I tell you that this new version is just so much better. Everything just seems to click, and I can feel a real connection to Ginny - your portrayal of her is simply wonderful, and her interaction with the other characters true to canon, and yet just that one notch different to make it remarkable. I love this story, seriously. And I can't wait for you to post the next chapter - when can we expect it? (I'm asking for purely selfish reasons - I'm going on vacation for almost a whole month, and will be cut off from all that's good and holy, e.g. the internet *g* - and I just HAVE to know what will happen next after this huge, heartbreaking H/G fallout in chapter 4) Well, whenever the next chapter is ready - keep on with the excellent tone and setting of this story - it's truly addictive. :) |
BurningWhiteRose chapter 5 . 7/20/2003 Oh my god... This is great. Poor Ginny though... Harry, you jerk. If only he could see past Cho Chang's pretty face, he would realize the muted sort of longing lingering in Ginny Weasley's eyes. |
Rosellia chapter 5 . 7/15/2003 i love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Also are LUna & Neville together?..i couldn't tell for sure. |
Niamh chapter 5 . 7/15/2003 What is going on? Fanfiction net says there is a new chapter since 13/7 but we cannot find it. |
Heather chapter 5 . 7/14/2003 Twas an excellent chapter and I sincerely hope that the next one will arrive without delay. I really like what you have done with Ginny's personality! One thing, isn't Katie the same age as the twins, meaning she graduated? Anyway, good job! |
Niamh chapter 5 . 7/14/2003 Wow! Just wow! What an amazing piece of work! You have given incredible depth to the characters and their reactions in this chapter. I was absolutely furious with Harry for acting like a jerk and I would have burst into tears, if ginny had. But Neville's sudden change in behaviour surprised me so much that I was saved, exactly like Ginny was. But I have to wonder. Does Harry's horrible behaviour have a hidden motive that will explain everything? I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter but if you are a bit late I am sure we will all understand because it is not easy writing such excellent chapters and after what we have read from your behalf, anything else would just be unacceptable. |
Perri Smith chapter 5 . 7/13/2003 An excellent story so far - a bit too much telling instead of showing at the beginning, but you've settled down nicely into the story. Excellent use of the tone and events of OOtP and I'm really enjoying your take on Ginny. The phoenix flock was terrific, and you're also drawing Neville and Harry very well. More please! |
Ginny Weasley chapter 5 . 7/13/2003 Update! Please Update! I just started reading and it's good, I want to know what's gonna happen. Why didn't Harry ask her to be in DA? I love the Pheonix thing! It's a great story, please update soon! Cate |
Audra Lachesis chapter 5 . 7/13/2003 I found this story on and decided to see if you had anything else written and posted over here. Wonderful story so far - you've stayed true to Ginny's new, deeper characterization from OOtP, and I can't wait to see the next chapter! |
Sparkle chapter 4 . 7/13/2003 hey this is really great. its really well written, pretty much in caracter and all. i hope u do a bit of lupin and tonks, cause i absolutely love that couple! but pls continue writing and keep up the good work. great job! |
bloodeemaree chapter 5 . 7/12/2003 I have to tell you that this is an absolutely fantastic story. You've done a wonderful post-OOtP job with the Ginnyness factor. I love it. Gah. I can't wait to see more of it. Cold-shower Harry. 'Bout time. Last chapter was a cheat on my heart though. Can't wait til you get the real thing up. *taps toes* I'm waiting... |