Reviews for Komand'r On Deck |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man, she's gone full tameranian. Not that I mind, I'm glad her biology is 100% effecting how she thinks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope she takes kori with her and she is a mainstay character, I love starfire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Which Blackfire is this anyway? There's like 5 of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally new chapter but its not enough! Please added more cant wait to found out what will happen next! Lol! We dont talk about the pink kryptonite... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story. I look forward to when Kom starts telling everyone that she is taking back with her about Thanos and the Infinity War. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea of the story is good, but the story itself is not what I expected. The crack parts of the story aren’t really all the funny and you have her act more like starfire than blackfire would act. If she is influenced by the memories of blackfire then she would be more unhinged than you have her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blackfire doesn’t have super speed, she does have super agility on the other hand. Which basically means she has super reflexes. I hope as the story goes on you get her powers right. |
![]() ![]() Hmm can Komand’r make a Futa sex spell to make babies? That’d be awesome and hilarious I can imagine kom using the futacock to brag to Thor or tony lol Maybe she could cross over to deferent hentai realities and plunder some sex magic so she could impregnate her wives Maybe the nasuverse too Merlin made artoria a temporary futa after all Since mordred exists the baby was healthy and strong |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy the adventures of the hot alien princess Komand’r, I honestly wasn’t sure what to expect at first, and I’m looking forward to her return to Marvel, but her time in DC has definitely been productive. At a guess you’re going to give Kal another universes Lois, or you’re going to play with time? Either way works…and if you do something else great, at this stage I more than trust this story to continue to be a lot of fun, just as long as you keep writing. Oh, also wanted to mention a couple other things, first, no matter how much Injustice Kal probably deserves death (or at least a severe beat down) it’s better to avoid that if Komand’r has any intentions towards Kara, second, I’ve always fallen on the side of the argument that says Joker didn’t actually rape Barbara, but that’s mostly because I don’t like thinking about her going through that. And with that run on sentence done…well, no, one more point, could you make Alfred younger too? Not twenties, maybe fourties’? It’s just he’s like my, hmm, fourth or so favorite bat family character? Always been a big fan of Barbara, hence why I fall on the side that says as bad as it was there was no rape, my argument being the Joker’s intent was focused on Jim so much he wouldn’t have been able to…well, enough thinking about that. After Barb it’s a toss up between Cassandra and Tim, then Alfred, so yeah, younger please? |
![]() ![]() Well your son is acting like a tyrant ma’am And he ain’t doing it well With his tech and kryptonian intelect he fails to see conquering earth and acting like a more retarded hitler or North Korean dictator won’t do him any favors Injustice Superman got no charisma man At least hitler and North Korea inspires loyalty to his countrymen however repugnant the propaganda is Guy had the carrot and the stick Kal-el just got a hammer and always sees nails everywhere Kal could have lead humanity like their god king with his street cred man He coulda incited powerful aliens to try and conquer earth Superman could stealthily assassinate those who would oppose his rule Batman cough the whole UN cough The invading aliens did it! while leading armies! He coulda made speeches about uniting earth into one banner (his own) Say shit like I can’t always save the day alone and all that bull slowly brainwashing with propaganda and his forces successes and victories to be help convince the nations to be more receptive to the idea But noooo he decided to fuck humanity in the ass without lube... And lemme tell ya If Batman wasn’t leading the charge with his no killing rule Superman would be on dissecting table right now lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter 25 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, trash fic ahead. Read at your own discretion |