Reviews for The Jig is Up
creativitykafune chapter 6 . 1/21/2006
Okay, I liked your idea of this story. What I just don't really like that it is to short. People like fanfics that have long chapters! So if you can, try to make your fics longer. Not short. But on the other hand, I liked it.
creativitykafune chapter 5 . 1/21/2006
Okay... that was good so far... please make it longer...
creativitykafune chapter 4 . 1/21/2006
I feel sorry for Toni, please make it longer...
creativitykafune chapter 3 . 1/21/2006
Okay... this chapter was kinda good, I shall continue and make it longer!
creativitykafune chapter 2 . 1/21/2006
sounds good so far, make the chapters longer next time...
creativitykafune chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
Hmm... sounds interesting, I shall continue and also, you should read my fics to and I'm thinking of making Miracle Girls fic to! This the first time I'm reading a Miracle Girls fic to!
golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 6 . 12/24/2005
This was a very nice story. Anyways, I hope to see more fics from you soon! :P
Kokari chapter 6 . 8/19/2005
very sudden but oh well. It was good.
mouse10 chapter 6 . 5/7/2005
I thought that this was one of the best storys i read. That has to do with Miracle Girls at least._
mouse10 chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
I like this story so far. I have to read more. I would say right more but seeing as you alrady finshed this story it kind of point less to say that . and also i'm still only on the first chapter. Still good.
Luffy V'shile chapter 6 . 1/29/2004
GOOD STORIE
i REALLY LIKED IT
Luffy V'shile chapter 5 . 1/29/2004
I bet I know why You aren't geting that many reviews.
I bet not that many people have user names
I'm saying this because when I first tried to review It wouldent let me because I hadn't logged on.
Well thats what I think
Luffy V'shile chapter 4 . 1/29/2004
HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHA
she is already in truble

Allready In truble
Luffy V'shile chapter 3 . 1/29/2004
Good storie so far
BUT it's so Short
Luffy V'shile chapter 2 . 1/29/2004
THAT
Was so short
Well there isn't that much to talk About
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