Rukia murder hobo

I enjoyed all three chapters in one long sitting so far. Your variations on the old story are innovative and interesting. I stopped and laughed out loud at the hilariously unexpected resolution to Uryuu and Rukia's first meeting.

I'm not sure if I like Ichigo's zanpaktou and powers yet but its an interesting twist. I do like the way his power set everyone into an uproar and instigated a potential disaster for our heroes.

Rukia's character was so displaced from what I normally consider her disposition but it logically follows the way you present Soul Society's samurai character. I was wondering if she would remain so cold and robotic but now we get to see development at the unfolding disaster. Rukia's 'true' personality is being allowed to emerge. I'm fascinated how it will unfold.

Thanks for a fun read!

I know I was kind of harsh last time, but this little alternate universe is starting to grow on me. Maybe a bit over serious for my taste but not bad. I especially like the twist of both Ichigo and Rukia being captured, I did not see that one coming.

So, you're diverging from cannon quite a bit. I actually wrote quite a long review but then looked back at the first chapter and realized you explained that Rukia would be OOC and you were changing the rules of the spirit world a little, though I would say making the noble family members not born in Soul Society is a pretty major change. Uryu too goes down easier than I think he should vs Rukia.

Of course, it is pretty clear you have reasons for the changes you're making and in that context it's good. Its just going a bit further away from cannon than I'm comfortable with.

It's a good story, it changes just a few details of Rukia's personality and vision that makes her closer to the Kuchiki philosophy. In addition to causing the change in Ichigo's psychology, which alternated the form and powers of his zanpakuto making the shikai look like a mix of Hanataro's shikai and part of Urahara's bankai power, having his powers some form of Kido for reconstruction.

Someday I found your story and immediately loved the perspective. Also, I'm very surprised at Rukia's attitudes. Even though you said she would be a little different from the canon, I didn't expect this from her. I can't wait for more chapters.

So far, I'm finding it fairly original. I love the concept and can't wait to read more of your ideas. I feel like this could be seriously canon-divergent, but in a good way. Stay motivated!

Very good, only a few minor spelling/grammar errors. It's not much to complain about. More importantly the premise is original, as far as I can tell. I like it so far. I assume Urahara is lying to Ichigo, not telling him about asuchi like in the manga? In any case I can't wait to see where this goes.

Loved the concept. A very interesting approach, and a very fresh one. I haven't reviewed a fanfic in ages so servs to say allot about what a feel about yours. Keep it coming.
Cheers