Love Cissy and James, and I'm really sad for bella, she should have a second chance too, I always like the idea about she and Sirius. And Lily would never ever have date, kiss or wed SNAPE, i'm pretty sure she would rather die.

Would be nice if Cissy and James had twins, draco and Harry.

Somehow depressing to don't see voldemort I'd have skipped this fanfiction altogether but I gave it a chance and my second instinct was good :) I rarely ever read these kind of fanfictions but yours was honestly a solid read.

Cool beans

Huh

It's cooking.

With the pairing you paired Harry and Katie so even though James married a pureblood the pureblood line of potter only survived one more generation thats a shame whole worlds going to muggles i guess

I really like the idea of James and Narcissa thought that was cool. Cant really forgive you for putting the idea of Lucius and bella in my head though and Lily and snape made me throw up in my mouth a bit tbh. Thought of Harry’s mom having greasy haired snearing little asshole children. In the end with the way the time line and story telling have gone this is getting pretty boring though. Its not really a first person perspective more just kind of a date by date overview of what’s happening without any real action. Its hard to get invested in it and kind of sucks that the first war ended with a duel between Voldemort and Dumbledore. Now apparently Lily and Dumbledore are going to go horcrux hunting? Its a harry potter but everyons lives no boy who lived no tragedy no nothing really. Really just kind of boring overall

new story harry katie or harry alicia thanks

seeing south africa win a quiditich wc before a cricket one is wild great chapter

yall said ella purnell as narcissa?

bruh why edward
thats a corny ass name

Got to say this was a joy to read, the majority of relationships had me smiling and reading further into this fic, my only issue is Ron but regardless, this fic is charming, decently written and above all it actually touched my withered soul. I cried during the last half chapter, had to put my phone down when James noticed Narcissa because i was just sobbing, all in all a good fic that I'd recommend others to have a read through.

Wow…. That was really cliche

Thank you for writing this story, I really enjoyed it! The scene at the end with James reading the story to Leah made me tear up. I wish we had a bit more of James and Narcissa over the years, as that was the original premise, but I also enjoyed getting to know all of the other new characters and relationships along the way.

Ok while I like the novel this chapter is so bad you have Thunderbirds native to Arizona in north america pulling a Japanese carriage out of the ground instead of flying what? honestly, this chapter should have had more thought into the arrival the Japanese should have arrived by boat since they are an island nation and the North Americans should have come by flying carriage, also just personal preference the South Americans would have been better coming in a giant canoe instead of a river barge but that just flavor really.