Reviews for Stellar Eclipse
melisa79 chapter 21 . 1/2
Please please please finish!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 10/1/2023
Be very very careful, I've seen this chapter before, almost word for word!
Ptool chapter 21 . 8/14/2023
excellent, as usual!
LibraryChild chapter 21 . 8/13/2023
I wondered why what I was reading sounded familiar, this is the same as chapter 17
KevlarKitten chapter 20 . 6/8/2023
A dark and delicious fic. At first I wasn't so sure about it but I ended up hooked on every word. Wow! Great work. I hope you continue
X.summergrey.X chapter 20 . 5/16/2023
I like seeing her losing her temper with them. Nice touch throwing those things too. Hope she finds some way that would get them to listen to her in those moments.
Ptool chapter 20 . 5/5/2023
excellent!
Clairebear97 chapter 20 . 4/23/2023
I’ve just stayed up all night reading this story start to the current chapter, and my gosh, it’s so so well written and amazing! I am really looking forward to reading more, so try not to make us wait too long (haha!). Thank you for this masterpiece!
DarkestPurpleRose chapter 20 . 4/22/2023
Absolutely amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter! Both Jake and Edward need to apologize to Bella for overreacting and fighting! Go Bella for breaking them up and standing up for herself! Hopefully Edward will make up for it later! I live for your writing and this story! Much love! xoxo-DarkestPurpleRose
Ptool chapter 18 . 12/6/2022
still loving your story. very well done.
Debbie Hicks chapter 19 . 11/9/2022
20. Chapter 20. Suddenly myself began having powers was a touch telepath touched her face intoned the words slowly a burst of an alien energy shocked her suddenly noticed hair was in rings of richer curls was held back by each five to six was in fact a Vegetarian but exposed Teenaged Ocampan ears was 100% pointed shell-shaped like Captain Spock's ears had regal Slanted eyebrows from home was a 2285 Starfleet uniform graduated from Starfleet Academy was in fact in training to be a Lieutenant from the Academy had a Command program My mind to your mind my thoughts to your thoughts our minds are merging our minds are One was purely more telepathic cured her of the attack cleansing her of her pain Alice about her she's Vulcan gasp what you do to her cured by cleansing her by removing her pain oh my god she looks like Lt. Saavik of Vulcan it's an arid hot but harsh world Carlisle re-tested me oh my god her blood is Gaean forest green is three times is much stronger physically greater but much more powerful she looks younger is about 65 years old but has a much longer lifespan looks not human but appearing in her early twenties just doing her training The Cullens horrified of my alien looks was in fact serene calm had control was Devoid of emotion attained by Kolinahr was Total Logic then found clothes of Star fleet MACO Clothes both then they were dressed in case of a crisis you called us T'Lar of Vulcan there is trouble afoot but I Have a bad feeling about this it's a bad omen myself began having premotions was a Medium was a Psychic ability began having Telepathic powers sensing Danger and evil was at work Had ESP was Extrasensory perception were from Star Trek Enterprise But from the fourth season my first practice of this called a Both to replicate more the two fled to the House Quill carried Claire now 3 to 5 years old of age looked 7 by now in her best he's getting heavier her hair longer in this with a braid guys crap she is saying to you in Vulcan myself began speaking in the Vulcan language fluently was flowing was accented but ancient but old and traditional but ceremonial in ritual sentences and phrases where she learn this skill and taught herself to speak from the planet Vulcan you Edward are her husband wearing the Nephilim betrothal Necklace Edward Cullen yes will you marry me as my husband since we are betrothal mated partners it was the woman's right to propose marriage from her a leap year to do so guys we have a problem he's engaged he's getting married but is her Fiancée Carlisle she proposed marriage to me she honored me welcome to our family Alice she is betrothed to him since they were prepared myself spoken in the Vulcan language fluently where you heading myself had only five pictures gasp it's a Oberth-class Starfleet scientific but Federation vessel holy cow she has a job a career path she's Assigned aboard the Grissom as Chief Science Officer Momma Mia sir! who taught her this way pardon a man looks much older mature looks healthy, but stronger Cullens see this it's Leonard Nimoy as Captain Spock cosplaying with her as his protégée huh down here a little girl nice uniforms thanks dressed up Saavik from help of the cast of 6 movies taught her to stay focused then sighted him his commander in chief Admiral permission to speak freely as you are ordered my voice was Starfleet but cold granted what are you, she is from the planet Vulcan it's an arid desert planet good god man Almighty we heard on her Communicator beeping like in the movie no way crap Paul was so drunk no beer in this house myself counseling him gasp Yikes Carlisle she is strict on her imprinter yes meet my kitten oh poor baby breed myself American Shorthair he meowed then a sneezing sound but blew his own nose guys poor baby puppies oh no my dog is a Mommy she had them out it was snowing furiously he was furious a Alaskan Husky a grumbling of Strom was heard no grumbling oh how small She liked puppies this little guy is hungry so his siblings must feeding time Excuse me I Never grumble madam oh how adorable they look they are so little and tiny crap crazy dog a father he was waiting for them to arrive well boy got a family he's a eating first how sweet they are where she get such knowledge and wisdom cool how sweet they are well son of the gun how young suddenly it came too late he was a Don Knotts of Vulcan oh no not him he paled of him muscular tall but powerful he shuddering of his height
was frightened of him was leaner bigger was afraid was only 20 years old Stacey was so beautiful hair blonde powder blue eyes longer in a bow was crimson bangs an heirloom was gorgeous he was seeing pointed ears of the Vulcans were extraterrestrial beings he noticed how young she looked was in fact much younger than him meet my puppy here Gorwon then he was on the couch we moved you with things to a campground home biggest to reside there then it came too late it came went a burp no thanks we are tired out from here Excuse me to sleep that is a good idea to regenerate like Borg drones he was asleep was too young was a St. Bernard puppy was tired out of it.
fairytalebliss182 chapter 19 . 8/12/2022
Yay new chapter! On the bright side, seems like them running into Victoria will overshadow Bella running into the creep. Hopefully they’ll come up with a plan to get themselves out of her trap. I mean, it would be wrong for them to never get to wear their prom dresses
Electra Heartless chapter 2 . 8/7/2022
this is cathartic. this is what i needed after new moon. bella treating edward the way he deserved THANK. YOU.
LyzzieKelly92 chapter 14 . 7/25/2022
Fucking finally! it's 2 am and I can FINALLY go to sleep lololol
Guest chapter 18 . 6/6/2022
I really like your version of this story. The characters have more personality and the sexual tension between Edward and Bella is so much better.
I cant wait for the next update!
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