Reviews for Bryony's Lament
Chiisai Senpai chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
*wails* that was beautiful..bless their souls, Bryony and Veil
Second2dead chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
dude I don't know what Redwall is excatlly about but I know your poem is awesome!
Mousewolf chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
*Sniffs then bursts into tears* NO! VEIL! He shouldn't of died!
Duel Battle and War chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
This is a truly touching story. Yes I am a Veil fan.I also like Blaggut ang Plugg Firetail.
Saz chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
That was a sweet poem, very nice!
Darks Light chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
aww that was soo sad, really good though
Lupinrager chapter 1 . 3/14/2004
Very nice poem, I mean, the best poem I have ever read in my life!
Patchwork Poltergeist chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
*sniff* So fits prefectly. I always loved Veil...
Songbreeze Swifteye chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
great job! so sad and sweet at the end. i like it. well written. i was gonna write something about bryony and veil also but never got to it. anyway, great job on this. keep on writing. and thanks for your review.
Rags chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
*sniff sniff* that was really sad and well done, it makes me want to read Outcast of Redwall again.
Rock Raider chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Woah... this is as sad as "Rose, my love forever.".
Skippy the Wonderfish chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Oh oh! How wonderfully imaginative. Beautifully written.
Sable Beachwood chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Oh, I loved this... Well, with the exception of the "mean old fart" line. Funny as it was, it was a bit out-of-place in this mournful poem. But all in all, this was beautiful. Outcast of Redwall is one of my top 3 favorite Redwall books (next to Mariel and the Bellmaker) so this just furthers my love of it. I'm in the process of writing a fic you might enjoy, cause it involves Veil and a little twist of fate... Great job! I'm putting this in my faves!

AnvilBlue chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
That was was so pretty...*is curently in awe*
Bubonic Woodchuck chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
I was almost crying...really I was...until I read the line "He loathed you, the mean old fart." Then I couldn't help it...I burst out laughing...

Oh well. Great poem anyway.
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