Is it meant to be readable or has something gone wrong?

Why do I feel like David’s a monster of some kind? Or it’s like when that Greek god created humanity using clay (why was he strapped up again?).

Please write more! This is so good!

This is so good!

you really should make a chapter where everyone sits down and talks about the godling buissness

Now I know you said keep the parent within the greek mythos. But for Jermy I belove the best parent or ancestor would be the Egyptian God Bes. Now why did I choose this one,because I remembered him from something I read and from what I learned Bes is the Egyptian God of Dwarves,as well as being one of the most ugliest Egyptian gods,who appeared as a hairy little man with a lion like mane and pug nose,with the power to ward of evil spirits. Now I think this works because I think it would fit with Jermy appearance and plus with his looks he could have scared off any would be attackers just by looking at them,so I am sure he could have lived long enought to make it to camp camp. Also side not I really wished you used children who are related to other gods from other mythology,you know give it some variety,that's just how I feel but I hope my suggestion helped,I hope you have a good day or night wherever you are.

I thought this was really good! …until you spelled Tabii with one I :(

So the plot is going to be like the original books? someone is gonna try to eat campers or going to bring Kronos back? are they going on a killer quest ?

Mate I love this! When are You going to post the next part?

I NEED THE NEXT ÁRT

Ohh ,i need this to continue 3

This is a really good read, glad to see the up date

Its David, isn't it? Or the platypus. Both make sense. Sort-of.
Nice story though! Can't wait to see where it goes!

Yay! you updated :D
Even if it feels slightly confusing,it’s still worth reading. :

I find this story already interesting,i always love Au’s like theses.I really hope to see next chapter! 3
I would love to read Max POV still to all of this for his reactionThe story is pretty good written actually,i’m quite surprised and i really enjoyed reading this already.