Reviews for Watching the Multiple Lives of Jaune Arc
Guest chapter 3 . 6/28
Boring
Snake551g chapter 3 . 6/14
father arc by TheFatallyObsessed would be pretty good as it would cause alot of questions and could lead to some interesting interactions. either way pretty funny chapter
randyr2015 chapter 3 . 5/27
Love it hope you keep updating
Linkman447 chapter 3 . 1/7
I only have one comment and that’s please check your pronouns an example is you seem to have a habit of using him or his instead of her or hers other then that thumbs up good writer
LionsCub1 chapter 2 . 12/1/2021
there's a story that i would want you include in reaction though its not a jaune story, however i think it can help them in the future titled "In the Cold" by RedHazard a centric one shot fanfic
LionsCub1 chapter 3 . 12/1/2021
there's a story that i would want you include in reaction though its not a jaune story, however i think it can help them in the future.. titled "In the Cold" by RedHazard it is a whitley scnhee centric just a one shot dic
LionsCub1 chapter 3 . 12/1/2021
its goood! IIIIITS GOOOOOOOD!
Michael Vines chapter 1 . 10/6/2021
need more
draculyn28 chapter 3 . 9/29/2021
interesting story, I hope to see what happens later, greetings.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2021
To ParadoxTheory374 Pyrrha only fell for Jaune because he didn't know who she was so her feelings are pretty shallow.
hapyjohn chapter 3 . 9/21/2021
good shit dude
JauneJaune chapter 3 . 8/31/2021
Good chapter!, when you get to do the ship "Dragonslayer" (JaunexYang) a good scene could come from Fanfic: Heart to Heart by Agent-G.

Although another interesting ship, it would be JaunexSienna (seriously that would get a lot of reactions XD), there is a fanfic called: A Knight And A Tigeress Find Love by Mando9.

Although if I wanted to see a universe where it doesn't focus much on ships, it would be in the fanfic "Branwen" by Seeker Pendragon, where Jaune is raised by Raven Branwen.

I look forward to the next chapter!
lB chapter 3 . 8/28/2021
really great work. I second the comment about madara june. There is some scripts online if you need help {and in some rwby fics its not technically copying as its a anime not theirs but you could alter it just in case
Frowen chapter 3 . 8/27/2021
To make it funnier make it so that Weiss is excluded and her mom, winter or gender bent whitley ends up with jaune, just to take her down a peg
Ghostly chapter 3 . 8/27/2021
Can you do the confrontation between Shirou and his older self from Fate/Stay Night: UBW with Jaune instead?
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