Reviews for Another Heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wait is shirou a groomer? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you ask me, I'd be more interesting to see Shirou waking up in the world of PRISMA ILLYA but in Illya's Body, but looks more like Chloe von Einzbern with Illya's Skin Color, while still having the Red Shroud Covering her Left Arm, with only a Note from none other than Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg being the only indication of how he, now she, got there, with Identification Papers in hand and an Address to the Emiya Household. In said Identification Paper, it says her name to be Lily von Einzbern (or your choice). I ain't telling you to make one, I'm just sharing my thoughts, but this is also an Interesting Concept as well. |
![]() ![]() You should know that your work is being plagiarized on Webnovel. book/another-heaven_30861562308209205 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been loving the story so far, cant wait till the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A heads up: Naruto_Kagenou over on web Novel has stolen your fanfic and is posting it there, along with a patreon trying to trick people into giving them money. I have also been targeted by them and I have reported them to Web Novel with a DMCA email. I suggest you do the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Praying for a new update. We’re reaching the climax of this arc and its gonna suck if it stops here before Sakura’s saved |
![]() ![]() ![]() And like that I caught up... no update since may too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's such a great and wild thing to say that the chemistry between Kirei and Shirou is my favorite part of this fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm happy you're back man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Author, please let your Shirou get the memory of Prillya-verse Shirou, I don't want to cry when his family finds out about their loss, it will at least soften their blow. I think Shirou can perform a structural analysis of his body to find out his past. This fits perfectly into canon, especially since he is the living embodiment of the sword concept |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou is just wonderful in this story. The way he both succeeds in what he does and screws up is just hilarious and sad at the same time. The reason for this becomes clear when you realize that he is still a teenager in a child’s body, with a lot of mental trauma and with Archer’s rationality suddenly falling on him, which he has not yet mastered, and this creates new Shirou, which I have not seen. By the way, I got a headcanon that your HF Shiro ended up in Prillya-verse because of the wish of Miyu to meet the closest possible version of her brother in the most happy world for him, in which he objectively cannot appear with his personality. And I still hope that magical girls will appear in this story after the end of the story arc in which Shirou will save Sakura, even if it is difficult to do this in the serious tone in which this story is written. I think the beginning of their arc can be justified by the absence of Shirou on his mission (maybe he and Bazett will be the ones to collect the first two cards?), so that he would not interfere with Illya in her first steps of learning her powers together with Rin, and I’ll be honest: I really want to see how Shirou will train Kuro to use his own powers and Miyu’s reaction to see him. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the way you have written shirou. Keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another chapter that proves Kirei superiority! All hail Kirei! |