Reviews for A Tale of Wings and Fangs |
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Yami no Ninaite chapter 10 . 10/23 Talk about piss-poor writing. Three schoolboys are able to bludgeon Harry unconscious _after_ he has achieved full Quetzalcoatl Animagus TF? After Harry has instincts to fight attackers, and has spent months studying lethal battle magic? Based on what you had written prior to your establishing his bludgeoning by author fiat, I'd far sooner expect him to cast that wall-spike combo you mentioned and eviscerate them, or transform and devour them. For a mere three schoolboys to so easily overcome him is a farce. 0/10 |
Guest chapter 27 . 10/16 I had a hope once that a one year hiatus would be more than enough to recharge the batteries so to speak. Since that is not the case this time I hope you will do the right thing and give this story to someone who can and will finish this story. Have a great day. |
Guest chapter 27 . 9/20 Love your story. Hope you will get a great idea to finish this story. |
Omnomphone chapter 22 . 9/10 Something that confuses me greatly here. Two things actually. 1: Harry KNOWS McLaggen was the fourth student that jumped him when he lost his wand, but now he conveniently doesn’t? Hmm, alright, possibly forgot their name bc McLaggen is canonically both a douche and extremely forgettable. However 2: Harry literally spent time going over Blood Feuds with Neville prior to the first task. That is a VERY big thing to just conveniently forget, and he seems to know enough about them to threaten Fudge with one, so why does he conveniently forget them to the point Gabrielle is now explaining them to him? Honestly, I like the story, but #2 alone tellers me that everything after Ch.22 needs to be rewritten, or heavily edited, because forgetting something that big, which itself could actually be a major plot device, seems short-sighted. |
mrmayortheiv chapter 13 . 9/4 Man, until now I was enjoying this story, but how many terrible fanfiction cliches and tropes can you fit in one chapter? It's just too much. |
Hi chapter 4 . 8/23 Hi |
WoodenDraconis chapter 27 . 8/12 Please update, this is actually a really good story and I enjoy reading it. |
Chelsea2valve chapter 27 . 8/7 Please bring this back |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/30 I hope you're able to break through your blocks and continue with this amazing story, luck be with you, |
Fox Sage 1 chapter 27 . 7/27 Please update the next chapter |
Fox Sage 1 chapter 1 . 7/26 I agree with you on the Animagus thing. There really isn't a lot of stories where Harry is an Animagus (and I think I have found almost if not all of them). And the reason I agree with you is because Animagus is my favorite piece of magic from the Harry Potter world. |
Jtf0012 chapter 8 . 7/24 angelina's last name is johnson not jones |
Clarinets chapter 8 . 7/21 I love your work Sir |
Soul Sendant chapter 25 . 6/19 harry is a douche and the suit is lame ugh such bad taste |
Soul Sendant chapter 12 . 6/19 the wand breaking after getting jumped would by itself be blood feud worth easily. |