vaya zero si que superas expectativas por cada capitulo nuevo que haces la vuelves mas asombrosa en serio esto es emocionante ya se dieron los primeros pasos para descubrir como calmar a primitive ademas de una nueva pelea con los iluminati sera interesante verla ademas del trabajo en equipo de hibiki y espada es genial, ahora pudimos ver un poco mas de miku y sus sentimientos aun con la presencia de touma los desarrollos en su infancia se mantienen y ella aun lucha con lo que siente por hibiki y busca expresarlo con su lucha como el espada del canon, ademas ahora serena se esta cuestionando sobre lo que el maestro de logos y durendal le dijeron y con el libro de airgetlam el recuperar sus recuerdos sera mas facil, supongo que lo de sellar las seiken pasara hasta la otra temporada que sera entre axz y xv como rxu no? o haras algo genial para axz, ademas es probable que miku y kento tengan una pelea epica en donde chocan en su modo de ayudar a sus amigos y lo que los impulsa a pelear donde de seguro kento vuelve a ser espada y miku se vuelve la nueva calibur todo antes de que saber alcanze su final form no?, bueno en cual quier caso esta temporada promete asi que adelante, bueno adios, caballero rojo fuera

Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is . You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling !

And now Kento has returned!
He going to seal everyones swords like in the series, isn't he!
Do you think he and Miku will dual each other due to them being the users of Ikazuchi!
And it's only a matter of time before Elemental Dragon gets revealed!
With both Kento and Luna back, Touma is officially reunited with his friends!

How come Desast never hung out with Ogawa, but Chris only? It's not going to be the same as the series, isn't.

Looking forward to more great chapters!
Thank you!
:D

Kento finally come Back...

To author
Awesome chapter!

Oh, so the main reason Primitive doesn't react strongly to Hibiki and Miku *is* because of their bond with Touma and not due to them not having the curse of Babel anymore? Well, the dang on that then.

Though, it does look like those two not having the curse means that they can read those ancient texts clearly, assuming there isn't another reason for it. Though, the neat thing with using the ridebooks more or less imprints on the user to start to understand the language a bit. Makes me curious to see some more moments like that with the other riders and wielders later, especially if it shows different levels of how much they can try to understand for each person.

Wasn't quite expecting the Saber vs Buster battle, though I guess I probably should have since you made sure to have the battle with Slash happen in RXU as a form of training for Touma instead of battling a traitor like in the show. Still, does also help with giving Logos' side more of the books he needs for his plans, with the technical bonus of Serena now having the Algitram book and having an interesting reaction to it. Here's wondering what that'll eventually result with later.

And now we have almost everyone finding the identity of the new Calibur. And here I thought that'd be held off a bit for one more chapter or something. Guess not when remembering how things went in Saber canon when the Primitive Dragon arc happened.

Well, either way, here's wondering how the next part's going to go since now it's learning about how Kento's alive and what his plans are and how it starts. I can only imagine how the reactions might be when you have Slash, Saikou, and Falchion get out of commission from the sealings, especially with the last two considering their situations. Oh, how I hope to see tears and some screams of bloody murder at Kento for what he does there.

Well, that should be everything for the most part.

Later.

Hmm. Strangely went differently than I thought it was going to be, at least with the fight. The neat thing with how Calibur showed up, though the kind of weird thing with how he quickly left after Germains group did only for him to show up just a few minutes or so after Primitive Dragon came back and started to rampage and disappear again like in the show. Just...doesn't quite feel as good or natural in a way, you know?

Though, the neat thing with Luna being a bit more permanent with staying with Toumas group for now alongside giving a bit more of an explanation about herself and her circumstances. Does kind of make me curious on what other heroes she might've chosen in the prior lifetimes might've like, though. Next thing you know, turns out a few might've been certain "heroes" of legend like Robin Hood and the like.

Tad surprised Touma and the others didn't make any comments or questions about the new Calibur after they got back to their base, though. You'd really think that particular topic would be brought up there, unless you're for some reason saving it for the next chapter.

Also neat with the bit of set up for the next two power ups with Toumas mom seeming to have the piece that would likely end up becoming Elemental Dragon while Sophia's working to get the book that's likely to end up as Blades Final Form. The bit of surprise if the one Toumas mom gets does end up as Elemental due to how it came to be in the show. That being unless it actually ends up being used for a different kind of power up book for someone else instead. Not too sure on any who's, though...

Guess another thing to maybe comment on is how Hibiki and Miku were the only ones Primitive Dragon was reacting to in a better manner compared to everyone else. You'd probably think it's mainly due to their friendship with Touma, but strangely enough, I can't help but wonder if that's a different kind of minor foreshadowing for how they're not under the curse of Bable like everyone else is. Might be looking too deeply into it, but I would be surprised if it did end up being due to that or the like.

I guess next to really comment on would be what we got with Ryoga and what happened with Reika. At least neat to see how the two "siblings" met along with getting a bit more of what happened to the real Reika, though the bit of a wonder on if that Noise incident that killed her was actually a coincidence or somehow Logo's doing. Again, probably too deep of a conspiracy, but who knows.

Does continue to raise the wonder on what's gonna happen when Serena does eventually get her memories back, though, especially with regards to Ryoga and his loyalties. Personally, I can't help but wonder on if these feelings with what happened to Reika and wanting to make sure to protect Serena as his new sister after all these years will be enough to have him leave Logos side and eventually join up with SONG or if he might need some other stuff to help with that. Well, that and what might happen and be said if he and Maria ever find a moment alone without anyone else to talk about things as Serena's respective older siblings. I mean, I should hope that something like that happens with those two, otherwise I'll be kind of disappointed.

I think that should be roughly everything from here, so here's wondering what's going to happen next since Cagliostro and Prelati seem to have some kind of plan in mind with using Serena as a kind of bait. And since you mentioned these next few chapters are going to extend this season, I'm going to assume it's to progress some things on the Saber side of things for Touma to eventually get Elemental Dragon, at the least. Maybe even with Kento revealing his plans and sealing one or two of the Seiken. Does kind of make me wonder now what might happen when he eventually tries it a few times when it's Mikus turn.

Well, only one way to find out.

Later.

Its me or Prelati has a Hate against Touma?

To author
Awesome chapter!

Update chapter! Yes! Man, I'd really wanna draw these designs especially Hibiki's Ultimate Gungnir. But then again, I'll have to re-read this story from chapter 1 just to be able to read the designs once again. X'DDDD

All Heroes and Allies have united against the Enemies, and I'm glad Maria managed to access the LINKER, now it remains to be seen what will happen... See you in 2 Weeks...

Dang. This certainly went crazy in certain ways I wasn't expecting. With how the initial trap was kind of set up, I really thought it was gonna end up with Primitive Dragon showing up and forcing Touma to transform again, with Yuri and a surprise appearance from Kento happening like in that one episode. This went in a very different direction than I thought.

Gotta say, though, the interesting surprise with that nightmare opening Touma had at the beginning before waking up followed by his brief conversation with Luna before she had to leave. Here's wondering what the reactions might be when he eventually tells everyone about them since he's currently trying to keep it a secret. At least some of his friends are noticing some of the signs that he's hiding something, so it shouldn't be too long before they "confront" him about it.

And the not bad bit with the extra moments with Carol in the dreamscape portion. Sets up how she'll be going back to sleep for a while, but at least that also helps a bit with setting up her return again later. Here's just wondering if we might get to see her again later before her stuff in XV happens or not, and if so how it might be done.

Though, I guess it also brings up the more minor wonder on if this means Elfnein might stop her tinkering/experiments with the device or not since she might not exactly need it any more considering the obvious right now. Here's wondering if it might get any other uses later, whether in here in the main story or possibly sometime else after it's over.

Don't think too much to say with the regards to action stuff, but the sad, but expected bit with how Logos now has King of Arthur in his hands. Now he has the first main piece he needs to create his personal Ride Book to become Soloman. Then just comes the wonder on when and how he gets the rest, especially Yuri and Kanade. Though, I guess there'd also be the minor wonder on if he might try and do anything with the Symphogear books if he gets his hands on any of them. I mean, could be used to either somehow enhance his powers to do Symphogear like feats or possibly set up the creation of another new power up like book for later.

I guess there's also the bit with what kind of method Miku used to achieve her Wonder Combo status. Not bad with how it works, though the wonder on she needs to stay with that for a little while longer or not and if it somehow has any effects on her body or not. I mean, for all I know, transforming that way adds a sense of fragility to the form or makes it where her nerves have some spasming problems after a while and needs to recover for a bit. Same technically being said if any of the other riders possibly tried that with their respective swords. When they get new wielders, I mean.

The neat surprise with having Desast show up to help Chris out like this. Raises some wonders again on if we might get some more like this with him later or not. Guess I'll have to wait a bit to know for sure.

Well, here's wondering what happens next with how things are shaped up to be at the moment. Will the enemy somehow manage to pull off a win some way, maybe with the Megid showing up to mess with things, and have Saber end up in Primitive Dragon again, or will something else happen instead?

Something to wonder about in the next update. I guess.

Later and Happy Mother's Day.

To author
Awesome chapter!

Well, at least things had gotten a bit better.

You make a good point about Touma and Rintaro being there helps out Hibiki a bit, since I don't think camaraderie between her and Tsubasa is happening any time soon.

so, for Blades when getting the Tategami Hyoujuusenki Ride Book will it be used in the beginning of XV; like the book for it would be in the ice as well as well as. As well as the Arabiana Night book, will it be that Miku uses it during XV. Also, when we see Elemental Primitive Dragon form will we see more of how Saber's body transform into elements to negate physical damage which also seems automatic when protecting Touma without his awareness when facing Durendal's time abilities in the show?