Reviews for Back To The Beginning
Cavelenare chapter 7 . 10/20
I think the biggest issue I have is how very openly and firmly they all call each other family/cousin/aunt/uncle etc so this story is straight up incest and it’s making me gag.
JackofTrades27 chapter 30 . 9/26
This story was really good until you decided to do Bella so wrong like that. Taking away fo teh kid sure but making so she cant concieve again is too muhc only for them to be able to concieve later. Clearly you realized it was a bad idea and made up for it in the epilogue. Also leaving a bitter taste between Lady Death and Harry is really dumb and removes the good relatioship they had. Really enjoyed this story but the ending was lack luster and clearly was just bad decision after bad decison
Lamorak Korving chapter 9 . 9/19
TO BE TOTALLY HONEST, Lucius Abraxas Malfoy always WAS-AND WILL REMAIN, a First-Class
Idiot. Even if the Dark Lord HAS provided Malfoy with a weapon, the Unspeakables personally
trained Harry, turning him into a lethal weapon. Thomas Avery and Craig Jugson are wise not
to get involved in Malfoy's so-called "plan".
Lamorak Korving chapter 8 . 9/19
Here are my fan castings for Druella Black and Cygnus Black II. Rosemary LeachDruella Black.
Christian BaleCygnus Black II.
Lamorak Korving chapter 6 . 9/19
For the young Amelia Bones, I think Billie Piper would be perfect. She has, after all, appeared in
various TV programmes, and always been able to pull off various roles: Rose Tyler in Doctor
WHO and Torchwood, Belle in Secret Diary of a Call Girl, and Lily the whore (Penny Dreadful).
I have no doubt she could pull it off.
Lamorak Korving chapter 5 . 9/19
I never really DID think that Helen McCrory was the best actress to play Narcissa Malfoy in the
Harry Potter film series. Personally, I would have cast the extremely beautiful and talented
Fiona Fullerton in that role. I think she'd have handled it flawlessly. Her acting skills are simply
marvellous. If any doubt my claim, then check out these DVDs: "The Charmer", "A Perfect Hero"
and the movie "A View to a Kill".
Lamorak Korving chapter 4 . 9/19
Here are my fan castings for James, Sirius, Dorea, Arcturus, Narcissa, Bellatrix and
Andromeda. Aaron Taylor-JohnsonJames Potter. Ben BarnesSirius Black III. Katie McGrath
Bellatrix Black. Cherie LunghiDorea Black. Fiona FullertonNarcissa Black. Timothy Dalton
Arcturus Black.
John Maitland chapter 3 . 9/19
Somehow, Voldemort, I doubt that. This NEWER Harry Potter has split with his fake friends, been
trained personally by Death and Saul Croaker of the Unspeakables, killed a lethal Dark Lord in
France, and personally dealt with Death Eaters that even Arcturus, Narcissa, Bellatrix,
Andromeda, Dorea, Sirius, James, and Charlus couldn't deal with. The old Harry you might kill, but
the new, IMPROVED Harry James Potter? Face it, you've got NO CHANCE of winning.
Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 9/19
I remember being a student at Hogwarts too. I was sorted into Ravenclaw in 1972, and my best
subjects were Alchemy, Ancient Runes Defence Against the Dark Arts. In my 4th Year, 1975, I became an Expert in Ancient Runes. And I was only 14. Dumbledore told me he was impressed, that
before me, NOBODY had mastered Ancient Runes at such a young age. I said that I had had help
from my loyal slave and whore Lily Evans, who, I re-assured James and Sirius, I had never
hurt. She just liked to obey and serve, and never tried to escape a spanking if she knew she
deserved it. Lily, I told them, needed direction, and a firm but kind hand.
Nyx Nightmare chapter 1 . 9/19
I met Hermione Jean Granger once. I told her to her face that her attitude, blind trust in all
authority figures, her smug, sanctimonious, hypocritical beliefs were what had robbed her of
having friends when she was young. I also told her that she needed to keep her opinions to
herself, and NOT ACT as if she was a member of Hogwarts Staff.
Maria chapter 30 . 9/13
I LOVE your story. Absolut love it!
thenoper chapter 30 . 8/28
I greatly enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new stories, I’ll keep an eye on your works. Thank you
WyrdSmith chapter 10 . 8/11
Okay, I love your story and your storytelling, first. And I know that it’s been a few years, so you probably won’t read this. Please don’t take offense.

The thing is, you use many phrases incorrectly, which makes me believe you may not be a native English speaker. Either way, kudos for writing a story and keeping a large group of readers happy.

I’ve ignored a lot of malapropisms and faulty phrases, but this one just can’t go unmentioned:

“It seems that your nephew has pulled his head out of the ground and started giving head to his feelings," Dorea explained happily.”

The phrase you want is not giving head”; it is “paying heed”. The second means to pay attention and consider something. The first means to give a blow job.

So, yeah. .

Thanks.

WyrdSmith
Shin Shin Tanren chapter 1 . 8/5
You just built up the fact that he learned wandless magic And now all of a sudden He's helpless when he's tied up..

at least be consistent
chriswillis0923 chapter 28 . 7/5
time turner would wrk great here
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