You just built up the fact that he learned wandless magic And now all of a sudden He's helpless when he's tied up..

at least be consistent

time turner would wrk great here

What happened to the other stories

you really are an assole

This is my fav kind of HP story, time-travel (or transported to an AU) to Marauder era or earlier. But its just too bad your fic is hard to read especially your dialogues. I guess I just don't like your writing style. And it looks like it isn't just me from looking at the chapter 1 reviews.

And it seems like I already tried to read this last year in April. When i opened a newly downloaded epub, it resumed on the start of chapter 2 (next chapter after prologue).

Wish you had a Beta when you were writing this. I'll try to read more...

Этот сюжет один из лучших сюжетов который я читал, в некоторых печальный или радостных моментах меня просто пробивал на слезы особенно последняя глава и прощальное письмо. Я очень люблю сюжеты по Гарри поттеру и рад что ещё остальсь такие люди которые пишут такие сюжеты, что захочется перечитывать их постоянно. Спасибо вам автор за такую работу.

Well two major plotholes in this chapter. They'll never get fixed though since this story is complete.

Harry isn't just dense he's just a moron. You overdid him not knowing to a stupid degree. Even the most sheltered person (That he isn't) wouldn't be this braindead or clueless.

The writing is INCREDIBLY cringe. It’s easily something a 12 year old would think is cool. Hard not to physically recoil while reading this.

Wow wonderful story than you nntschi

thanks for the good read. Always enjoy a good hp fic with the black sisters.

And there's the stupid age changes. Black sisters triplets? Nymphadora was born in '72/73. I can never understand the need to cram everyone into the Marauders' year. Like seriously, Lucius was a Prefect in 1971, so what does thst tell you? Nott and numerous others shouldn't be there. Every character who ever existed is apparently at Hogwarts. The war started in 1970; it didn't wait till certain people graduated school. So ridiculous.

Millicent Bagnold didn't become Minister till '80. Anybody who calls them a Harry Potter fan will know that Ted Tonks' name is obviously Edward not "Theodore." If its just AU shenanigans, you should have Harry react to all of this.

I see a bunch of other errors when skimming through the chapters. I remember this fic. I even left several reviews. Apparently Tom Sr. is a Muggleborn lol. Now I remember why I gave it up. Its like the author knows bare mimimum about Harry Potter.

*sigh* It's almost impossible to find a good Marauder Era time-travel fic. I wish I could go further, but that seems to be impossible when things keep jumping out at me.

Sounds interesting but I hesitate to read it. Most time-travel fics force unneccessary age change onto characters.

After reading up to this point, I came to the very logical conclusion that the author must be mentally retarded.

I know that attacking the author is cheap... but come on. Who writes in such a mentally challenged way?

So much fkin BS in this story.