So much fkin BS in this story.

and you completely ruined your fic with this complete bullshit. Voldemort the unstoppable, has a super ritual for everything, and Harry Potter the lazy fuck who wants to so badly end things, that he sits around doing fuck all so Voldemort can recover and murder his unborn child.

you know Tom Riddle was a pure muggle, not a muggleborn, yes?

ugh this was terrible. Yes everyone focus on Bella losing her shit rather than figuring out some way to help Harry who is DYING.

Fantastic story. Very well written. 10/10.

Harry Should‘ve snapped the wand too, as a final Fuck you…

Very nice ending to a very nice story. Thank you.

loved the story! Did i miss the special timeturner death gave harry anywhere? i was expecting it to help bell.

The bittersweet ending. People always write happy ending but in the end people will die. No one escape Death when it comes, might as well embrace it together…

Incredible story. Thanks!

I thought I left a review… I guess I didn’t. While the plot to this story was good it could have been executed better. Either English isn’t your first language or this was written when you were a toddler. Grammar mistakes, punctuation, nonsensical sentences. Those are the least of the problems though. The biggest issue is the fact that despite your Harry being trained by the Unspeakables, he’s careless and petty. He could have killed Voldemort on the spot but wanted to gloat at being better and in the end it but him in the ass. The ending to this story feels rushed too. Over all it’s a good plot, that’s ruined by all the mistakes you made.

Tom Riddle Sr was a Muggle not a Muggleborn. Seems like a silly change.

Albus Dumbledore is the Chief Warlock of the Wizengamot.

Thanks for the share. Enjoyed this time travel fic. A mix of happy and sad ending but nicely done.

And this is why he should have just killed him not cursed him so he can suffer for some time never giv3 your enemies a chance to come back