Reviews for In between light and darkness
Ryan chapter 8 . 3/17
This needs to be edited a few times, a spellchecker at minimum.
Draconc89 chapter 5 . 3/6
A fraction is part of a whole while a group of people is a faction.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25
Wtf! Just in the last chapter Harry said he wanted power and knowledge. And now he has sworn to never intentionally harm others for power and revenge. He is also here because he wants "revenge" against Voldemort and Dumbledore. You can say that he is doing death's bidding, but indirectly that is a revenge!
Premedicated chapter 8 . 1/14
I hope you continue this!
kageknuser2710 chapter 2 . 12/29/2021
How is this in between? The dude just swore he would never use his magic for power and revenge? He turned himself into a little bitch. For the Slytherin Heirship. You tried waaaaaaaaay too hard to make the Slytherin seem like a light family. Totally ruined any possible plot by doing that. You set yourself up for a plothole the size of the sun. Too bad
BROMBROS chapter 4 . 12/17/2021
It is faction either light/dark/neutral not fraction.
leader.dbz chapter 8 . 12/9/2021
When's it gonna be updated?
Sylvie Chevasson chapter 3 . 11/12/2021
C'est très confus, s'il revient en tant que orphelin et n'ayant plus de sang Potter et Evans pourquoi revient il chez les Dursley. Et puis dans un chapitre il a 8 ans et le suivant 6 ans?
Guest chapter 8 . 11/3/2021
Why does he keep crying out his spell rather than shouting them out? It's such a weird thing to say.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/3/2021
It just feels like you used most of the chapter, and indeed a lot of the previous ones, as a chance for bashing. I know the description said there would be bashing but at least also include other things.
Also, incendio is literally a spellt taught in the first year of Hogwarts, what are you on about 'a borderline dark spell hardly anyone uses'.
"This spell was listed in The Standard Book of Spells, Grade 1 by Miranda Goshawk.[1] This spell was also taught to students during their first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry in Charms "
lightningsnow33 chapter 8 . 11/5/2021
I have never seen an author start a story so well just to drop the ball so hard. You dragged things out WAY too much. It could have been explained after a time skip what harry learned but you spent 2 chapters on shopping and a long unimportant flashback when its been made clear that this harry gave no fucks about anyone anymore because they all betrayed him. Then for no reason whatsoever you start a tournament arc, WHY? You spent too much time on unnecessary things and it took away from your story
roon0 chapter 4 . 11/3/2021
He could afford to rescue more elves.
roon0 chapter 2 . 11/3/2021
Good for Hadrian. :D
roon0 chapter 1 . 11/3/2021
I am loving the start of this.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/30/2021
Please move the story along nothing is happening. Please get to the plot I mean yes the tournament was nice but most of it was just monolog.
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