Your Darcy is gentle and not too eaten up by pride even without Kent. Quite an enjoyable read. I always enjoy a strong but feminine Lizzy

HEA for all who deserved !

I enjoyed how Darcy was such a wonderful brother to so many and how he and Elizabeth because parent figures to all of them. A beta would really help elevate this story. Take care x

An interesting settlement indeed. Reasonable that Mr Darcy would wish to have nothing to do with Mrs Bennet or Lydia!

I love the idea of a Kitty who isn’t just silly

From the first to the last page, Mr Bennet failed his daughters. He didn't deserve the end he got.

This story started off good then started declining from the Charlotte drama to Bennet living in luxury with the Darcys and with no responsibilities drama. I don't get why Gardiner shared all the information about the Darcys to Bennet. Mrs Darcy was now the messiah for young girls

So is this Viscount Milton Lady Catherine is thinking about the same who was accosting ms Harrington outside the tea shop? Wouldn't Georgiana have recognized her cousin

It was hypocritical of aunty Charlotte complaining about her mother wanting one of her daughters as mistress of Longbourn when she herself accepted him and was about to marry him.

Too many grammatical including spelling errors in this story that it spoils the flow of reading

Ugly spinster Charlotte agreed to marry a toady halfwit to avoid almost certain spinsterhood, an act of desperation that displayed a profound lack of self-respect yet the biggest disgrace was her being Mrs Darcy. There can only be one Mrs Darcy if it's not Lady Anne, and that is Mrs Fitzwilliam Darcy

And this is the same bitch Lady Matlock who were welcomed back to Darcy House

This is the same asshole Bennet this writer wholly excused and brought back into his daughters lives, disgusting

Three major shortcomings that failed this story:
1. Mr Bennet failed his daughters yet he was easily forgiven and welcomed by the Darcys. Even at the very end when Darcy helped Lydia it reinforced Darcy as being the better man.
2. What an insult to Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth Darcy that Charlotte Lucas became Mrs Darcy too. Should have been Darcy Sr sister with the son marrying her.
3. You undermined Darcy's character yet he did the most to help all the females that descended in his home and you glorified Bennet.

Great story, twists and turns. Enjoying the story!