Apologies, this last review was for 'Damage of Deceit'

Apologies for the previous review, it was meant for the unfinished story 'Damage of Deceit'

Such a shame this story wasn't completed. I hope all is well with you, would love to read the rest of it.

Absolutely loved this story!

Loved the book. Hope you have another in your mind. I thought it was great Thank you so much for writing it & publishing it.

This was a great story, thanks

Sometimes I like to read something that turns out well and this was it for me

Shocking that Darcy just allows the Bingley bitches to tarnish his name by embarrassing his wife and sisters, without any consequence to them. The men in this story are fucking wimps

The excitable puppy Bingley was a wimp bitch and the vapid Jane should have been matched with someone better

It was too soon for you to dump one girl after another on the Darcy couple whereas you should have given them space like in months before Mary popped up which meant Jane being there and without them even getting closer as a family you dump the bitch Charlotte and sister on them, followed by Anne then the Fitzwilliam daughter making this a girls hostel run by the Darcys with the minimal interaction between husband and wife in this story. Then your topper was bringing the failure of a father into their lives who was basically a cuck now seeking sympathy which was shocking for the 1800s.

Why was the Earl of Matlock allowed into the home without Darcy being present, the footman should be on notice

You should read "Away from Longbourn by FroginHertfordshire" to see how Mr and Mrs Bennet were dealt with, not this wimp approach adopted in this story where he's had a second coming

Wasn't Caroline gossiping about her being Mrs Darcy while they were at the theatre when the Darcys made their first public appearance after marriage and with their sisters? So does Caroline now suffer from Alzheimer's

Living in the luxury of the first circle without spending his own money, the indolent and negligent Mr Bennet is given a new life thanks to a writer who uses a medical condition which thousands of men and women suffer from,to excuse his actions.

Charlotte and Marie have their own rooms...was Marie able to sleep alone after her rape? Lucas Lodge must be spacious for all those children

Really dislike the name Eliza which sounds so reminiscent of Caroline Bingley. A pity that you had to include the spiteful bitch Charlotte in this story through Marie being raped by Collins and make her Mrs Darcy too.