saint george?

I feel i need to watch tanya

У меня от этой главы путожнометр сломался

You should really look into getting a proofreader/editor. This is a fun story, but the regular misspellings and wrong words is very distracting.

Es una historia con mucho potencial, pero enserio por qué haces que Tanya actúe como una niñita aterrorizada cada ves que surge un problema, por dios a muerto dos veces y a luchado en una guerra, es una maldita veterana en lo que respecta a conflictos.
Pero tú la retratas como una maldita espectadora que no puede hacer nada, solo se dedica a observar y ver cómo todo sale mal sin interferir en nada.

This has great writing. But it doesnt feel like a Tanya story when she is hardly ever the focus. I mean, sure she is referenced a lot, but this would be more enjoyable if the perspective was more limited. I would say there is too much worldbuilding and not enough character development. At least in my opinion. Regardless, thanks for the story, its an interesting read!

Well, being X messing up talks... Thats expected, but stilll...so blunt...

Thanks for the update. It is refreshing to see things getting tripped at cosmic scale, will there be a war with the gods in falmart? I wonder how Tanya will try to "fix" it.

Deus Lo Vult

Hey, author friend, you should address the issue of falmart diseases at some point, as this would be a disaster for us who live on Earth.

Since it's quite obvious that with so many humanoid species that can even have children among themselves, any diseases present in that environment must be serious.

Since they would be bacteria or viruses adapted to affect multiple species of humanoid beings, making them a true medical nightmare for the mediocre people of Earth.

For example, a super smallpox adapted to multiple species and even with effects from other diseases.

Or even a version of the canine parvovirus that also affects humans and is transmitted through the air.

It would be very interesting to see what would happen, for example, if someone like Emperor Molt came up with something like sending blankets or fine clothes covered in viruses, as if trying to give his enemies plagues, something many kings in the past did against their adversaries.

And that would cause a plague in Japan, giving us a pandemic-style plot.

Se viene una pelea no solo de mundos, sino de Dioses... tambien por Rory supimos que en ese mundo lograron destruir sus templos y a todos sus fieles, pero al abrirse la puerta parece que su influencia regreso, y los Dioses están preocupados pues Ser X es muy rencoroso. Por eso en este mundo ellos mandan poder a sus heraldos quienes piden serlo y no fuerzan a nadie a seguirlos.

Curse being x. Thanks for the chapter.

Interesting indeed

Being X can’t stop meddling.

Sonovabitch. This is going to kick things off again in a big way, I can already tell. Who is he going to shoot? Or attempt to shoot? Tanya? Pina? The Emperor? Or one of the Japanese characters?