Reviews for Hell in West City
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
Awesome story!
young saiyan chapter 2 . 8/27/2013
Really good fanfiction, and vegeta is funny as hell lol
dcp1992 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Great chapter! Love the idea. But there are about 3 problems I see. 1) Gohan and Chi Chi married after Goku won the 23rd WMAT and they were 18 at the time, but they did have Gohan within a year. 2) Gohan and Videl in the saiyaman/Buu saga are 16 cannon. A lot of people though use the Anime filler episode about Gohan's birthday and make him 11 during Cell, which is wrong, he is 9. so, he and Videl are actually in the 2nd year of high school, not Senior. 3) I believe that female saiyan's are not that rare, if they were, how did the saiyans reproduce on there home planet? Anyway, other that that is was a good chapter.
K-the-Queen-of-Typos chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Lmfao. this was funny! it made me giggle so hard. and im NOT known to giggle... at all
sonicvegeta chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
please finish the story it's a good one
BARBIE chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
very romantic,very humorous and very exciting too, Just losimply loved it.
Gabby-Chwan chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
please, please,. please update soon! ths fic is so cute! *faving*

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Blue Nariko chapter 2 . 7/20/2007
aww the going away party was soo sweet and wow bulma and wow vegeta fight alot!
Franky Sanchez 125 chapter 2 . 1/19/2007
Hahahaha, that was really funny. I was a little sad about there only being two chapters! Why? My best friend recommended this and I'm so glad that she did. It's really good. Update again soon. later!
Arisu Tsuranu chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I CRACKED UP AT THE HILARIOUS PARTS! you're good!
A-chan chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
Great story, hope you update soon! And I love the way you portrate Gohan _
korrd chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
I really like it. Update soon.
korrd chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
I really like it. Update soon.
korrd chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
I really like it. Update soon.
korrd chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
I really like it. Update soon.
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