Smol Amiya: "...Dokutah? Did marbles...hurt you?"

Dr. EMIYA: "No, kiddo. I hurt me."

Dr. EMIYA: "I also hurt marbles. I feel worse about the marbles..."

i hope you return to this

Brother, I found this fic and let me tell you, you catch me, please tell me you're gonna continue this because I really want to see this version of Shirou fighting in Terra

This is really good!

Sadly, we would never be able to see the other chapters... This story is abandoned already?

I want more…. T-T

I guess you can replace magecraft with Arts here, and the possession is consider a psychic Arts hence Rule Breaker should work. Jesus, this is quite the canon divergence, may be not destroy the Reunion immediately as Patriot can temporarily lead but I don't think he has the skills for national level strategy to start Reunion attacks, recruitments, and sabotage in other countries and factions where he isn't there.
What made Reunion scary was due to their supreme numbers, may not be in good quality, yes... but with a mastermind and old as Kashchey, and morale/hatred of the troops always high due to discrimination, take a look at Lelouch in Code Geass. Dude was always outnumbered and outgunned, but with just a few exceptional pieces, and decent discipline, it would have almost taken the whole fleet of the enemy at the time to fight him, if it weren't for the kidnapping.

Considering that Shirou is using Archer's body, and he is not healing that quickly even without Artoria, Avalon is not in his body. Of course, out of all non-human made NP Avalon is the only projection he could project perfectly, in Gaia/nasuverse.
Since he is in Terra, basically different rules, would Avalon be considered as the antithesis of Originium?
What I am saying here and anticipating is the moment, Shirou would project Avalon, may be against a catastrophe. Would it just protect him and his crew, would it turn Originium to something a cure for Oriphathy, Shirou being Shirou would he accidentally start a cul-*COUGH COUGH*-I mean religion. Would Nearl or the Jeanne-like Saileach become his knight/priestess, would AI priestess become a yandere?

So much promise

Helo,few days from 1 year state here that the premise and the sole idea of junking shirou into emiya's stand is inventive for your part heavily spears shirou's philosophy really sends me to my point about shirou's monologues, thoughts just in three chapters...I will write here that the words used was good and thoughtful, however it's a tiney tiny excessive I guess? This is just three chapters so not much to face tbh. More interactions without shirou putting his ideals would be good sequences were pretty entertaining.I ain't much to input about the in and out of his abilities since I am not familiar enough to review about it.I would love to to read more!

Are you going to update this book or yoy already abandon it?

Pray for more updates cause this story is awesome so far

I hope you return continuing this chapter... Please

Quite amazing to say to tell the story since the very beginning with details; I sense some canon divergence. Continue your hard work but take your time, thank you for writing this.

Amazing writing, you don’t get a lot of good Arknights crossovers. It’s too bad most of the good ones are all abandoned, including this one. Hopefully someone will adopt this someday.

Yoo, just found out about this fic... didn't think there's any good arknight fic. Also, is Shiro himself an infected? is magic different than originium arts? so many question so eager can't wait for the answers

Posted that last review before explaning the point. but I feel this story could benefit from more dialogue and interactions between characters then actual action. Probably going to get more of this when getting to rhode island. As for pacing, it felt a bit slow because their was a bunch of shirou's moral monologues on philosophy that interupted the overall flow of what was going on. They arn't bad in itself, but I can't lie when I want to see how this shirou interacts and deals with situations and other characters more. Still a great start imo, but these are early issues so far, not deal breakers or anything but just ones I've noticed.