Reviews for The Legend of the Son of Poseidon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i meant with the uhh noise |
![]() ![]() ![]() man dang poor guy didn't want to wait 7 thousand years which is 7 millinium |
![]() ![]() ![]() the flying fluke he has access to his powers basically well that's very swell and lovely RULE THE EXISTENCE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when will you be updating? you're late. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update please. this story is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() pleaseeeee continue! |
![]() ![]() I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, Please, Please, update again. I'd Love a new chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the Titan King rises - that was great. I wondered what you will do about Pan - and it looks interesting. And 1 still remains... Can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() loving this story, I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely love it, he was a bit op at times but who doesn't love a badass Mc. The fact that Artemis spoke so casually and with new lingo was a bit weird but I just assumed in my own head Canon that it's because she recruits teens and preteens so she'd be aware of all the new stuff more than any other god, however other gods speaking that way was a bit off putting but it was rare enough or done rightly enough to not be a bother. My only real upset is that I found this before it's finished since I kinda binged this in a day and night but don't know the ending, Absolutely look forward to it tho. I can't wait to see them find out about Alexander, see the relationship come to be, see Percy become even more op. Can't tell if him struggling to find a way to hold more power is foreshadowing of finding a way or him just becoming a God/immortal the day of his 16th birthday. Considering he just needs to make it to 16 he could eat the last apple at 12:01 the day of. Ugh so many thoughts about it and now I gotta try to ignore this for a while till it's completely done lmao. Thank you for the very enjoyable story, much needed enjoyment and escape for me. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter however I noticed there seems to be a missing scene in there cause chapter 38 has Percy and Artemis head to the place where the hunters pray to artemis from. Then chapter 39 has how the h7nters meet up with nico and learn about the string being given to Luke. Then there is a cliffhanger where is seems a big fight should be coming up. However chapter 40 starts with the group just walking long and making comments on a meeting we did not see some thing mentioned such as Percy giving his armour to Artemis and so on. I was curious as I seems like there should be a short scene between chapters 39 and 40 |
![]() ![]() ![]() so my only issue is you don't need to say my storm rider or the riptide you can just say riptide and storm rider other than that this is great so far |
![]() ![]() Another great chapter, just one question, how would zoe have seen Achilles fighting without the curse if he had gotten it as a child? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read your story and loved it. I really like Percy being strong and brave. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |