Reviews for The Legend of the Son of Poseidon
Guest chapter 58 . 3/24
Bro pls update plss please
AlexiRomanoff1 chapter 57 . 3/19
'Tis good Story
Guest chapter 58 . 3/17
Pls update bro
AlexiRomanoff1 chapter 35 . 3/18
I said DISARM ONLY
Gameover9968 chapter 58 . 3/17
First of all I absolutely love this story, like it's easily one of my favorites on this site. Secondly a random little idea I had for the end of the story that I'm sure you already have planned out but nevertheless, idk if you are going to continue this onto HoO but if you don't, rather than having percy be granted godhood what if he just becomes so powerful that he just like sheds his mortal form, breaking through the mortal limitations he talks about in the story. Another side idea to this is that when reaching the immortal form, Alexander can either split from him and regain a body or they merge into one being.
Anyways thank you so much for this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Guest chapter 58 . 3/15
Pls update
Nai Darkor chapter 58 . 3/17
I can’t get enough of your story.
Anaklusmos and Strychnos chapter 58 . 3/12
Stressful
akvjht chapter 8 . 3/9
and reveal the traitor to know the foe in the end
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Robbler chapter 7 . 3/11
Well, so far I see no changes besides his stepfather never being with his mother and his mother not being kidnapped (Infact we've seen nothing of Sally at all).

You introduced Alexander, but he feels nothing like a god at all, more like a SI (If he was an SI he could actually work by the way). He knows to much, is too Mary Sue and is way to prepared. Like, man, the dude has no bad points about him besides him being already dead. Doesn't sound like an Olympean at all.

The biggest problem with overpowered MC stories is, that people don't want to branch out too much, believing that if the MC just defeats everyone easily it'll make the story boring.
That's true.
If Percy was just defeating enemies left and right easily, it could get boring.

That being said: If you make him hide his skill (for no apparent reason at all but to keep to Canon) the story is just as (if not more) boring, because we already know everything that is going to happen.
You choose to write an OP character? Stick to it.
Also, while I admit OP chars can easily bore the audience, there are ways to go around that (See One Punch Man), for example: Focus on emotional growth instead of growth in power, push the SCs to the front and make them more like secondary MCs, have the OP MC not involve himself with anything (if you are OP you don't have to care at all), etc.
Empowering enemies as you seem to have planned is a way too, but it's quite difficult to enhance them in fanfictions without pissing people off left and right.

You had a brilliant idea for a story and I for one think you are quite talented, but if you keep to the original story too much, the original writers mistakes are going to pile up to the ones you will make yourself (everyone makes mistakes while writing, there's just no way around that: You forget something, you leave stuff out of the story because you think everyone knows when in reality only you do, you kill a character and then write entire chapters with him still alive so you either have to change the past or the future of your story, etc.).

I wish you all the luck and success in the world :D
Death Fury chapter 57 . 3/10
Excellent chapter
Immaterium chapter 58 . 3/9
Hecate - quite the tricky character isn't she, I like her :-D
Guest chapter 58 . 3/7
Pls update man love ur stories
Guest chapter 58 . 3/6
Pls update more frequently man love ur stories
atikshubarthwal chapter 58 . 3/8
bro just drop all ur chapterss PLEASE U TAKE SO LONG imma cry
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