Na, creo que es una historia buena, vas algo rápido pero no está mal lo de ned entiendo tu punto aunque si lo críticas tu porque le pones algo que no va con el libro que es que ned siente algo d odio por ellos por las muertes de muchos algo que no sale en los libros solo que recuerde menciona que se lamenta por la guerra sin sentido lo de como ama a su amigo concuerdo algo al menos, pasi que si lo críticas tu porque eso sale de ti al principio pero no es malo, sigue así amigo espero que le des conclusión o si no al menos avises hay buenas historias que ni avisan jeje.

Bruh, every twin sister in your work is always overpowered. They always start late and surpass the MC. I wonder if you are a female or a submissive beta who bends over for his mistress. Your preference makes your work feel like a pineapple pizza.

Bhai, your OC better not be stupid, unless he wants to shame India.

I noticed that like 90% of the last 50 reviews that aren’t bots, all dislike the shit you’re doing. Stop pulling off nonsense.

He knows about the white walkers. Jesus fucking Christ. They are the ultimate antagonist of the entire story and he read it before in the past. How has he not thought of it at all? You can say that he has forgotten most of his memories, but it’s kinda hard to forget the main fucking antagonist that plan on killing everything and resurrecting them all as zombies. He should’ve been thinking about them since he woke up and figured out what world he’s in. Come on. Stop this nonsense.

See this is why I fucking hate forced plot from authors. We all know she could’ve saved herself when she heard the dragons roar when she was taken. Because the dragon showed up once he got shot with an arrow and he was chasing her on ground. That means she was with an ear shot of the dragons swooping down. Everyone should’ve heard the dragons roar. Her captors should’ve heard the dragons. She should’ve saved herself. But no. You wanted to force the plot and have him meet his ancestors. It’s all stupid. Anyone with half a brain reading this is only going to be thinking about that as they read these chapters.

We just gotta ignore the fact that his sister knows magic and could save herself? Stupid forced plot.

Come on this is your best story, update this one instead of all of them. I really don't understand why authors would do that. I mean, were you focused on this story (i say this one because it's my favorite), and you'd update it regularly, i'd subscribe to your patr3on with pleasure, but instead you have who knows how many story, and each get, what, a chapter every 3 months ? Come on how does that make sense, and it's not, only, against you, i've seen many authors do that, and i really can't wrap my head around it, it just doesn't make sense to me. Focus on one story, finish it then move on. I can't help but be resentful to authors doing that. I can't stay hyped to any of your stories if I know it'll just stop for the next 3 months once I reach last chapter. So I guess i'll just wait 10 years and come back when, and if, you ever finish it :X

Awesome fanfiction, keep up the great work

Great

Thanks for the chapter again

Very good chapter

Thanks for the chapter !

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter..