Raising my hand in front of her, I manifested the elemental power within me and with a soft sound like a blade cutting through air, small spikes of ice grew over my palm.

"My guess is that the title of Winter Kings was as literal as it could be", I shrugged, focusing on the ice and shaping it into a small cube, Visenya hanging on every syllable with wide eyes,"both of us can manipulate the elements of winter. The Snow, the Ice, the winds or even just a chill which comes from being outside."

Okay. Adding in elemental powers to BOTH of them? And giving them both dragon eggs?
How much more bs are you going to throw in here?
Sometimes, less is more.

“'My name is Tushar Jaju, I am 14 years old. I died due to a buffalo running over the roads. My favorite subjects are Science and English. I wanted to become a Scientist or an Army Personnel. I watched porn for the first time last night.'“

Making the self-inert 14 years old is a mistake. Now, it will barely be believable if he makes too many changes. There’s only so much life experience and knowledge he could have at that age.

Adding in a twin sister is incredibly cringe and unnecessary.

Please update your Story named "Unchained"
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Awesome story, hope to see more soon!

Great story looking forward to more

Please update your other Fanfic named "Unchained"
PLEASE!

Tyler13roney, you may have read the books but you surely did not comprehend any of it. You read the morality of the books black and white when it is supposed to be nuanced and filled with grey characters. Just because that is your perception of the books, does not mean that everyone else should have it, and if they have any other perception then that must mean they haven't read the books or watched the show. You come out here, judging the characters of the books as bad people but at the same breathe wanting to snap an innocent baby's head, you damn hypocrite.

And I could barely understand you.

Thanks for the chapter.
I can't wait to read what will happen at Winterfell

Thanks for the chapter.
I can't wait to read what will happen at Winterfell

They aren't OP enough.

Agreed about everything that you said about the "Faith of the Seven" Considering just how much their followers seem to Indulge in the "Seven Deadly Sins" I think that they are Demons if they do exist.

Honestly, I would prepare a slow painful poison for the Tully and and give it to her as soon as Rickon is Born. Make it seem like she died in Childbirth.

love it

Thanks for The chapter

This is pretty bad.