Really? Catelyn slapping them, locking them in a room, humiliating them? When? Why?
Oh yeah, right, you can't have an awesome bastard story without turning Catelyn into a Cinderella type evil bitch... Read the books people! Catelyn never ever ever ever mistreated the fan loved bastard. She just didn't love him - and why should she?

I’d have to agree with guy.

Stark fanboys will be displeased it won't be another stark wank or pro stark si. This is a refreshing story given apparent animosity with the starks and how will that turn will surely be intriguing.

I think this story has a lot of potential! I'm also hapy you're not one of those people that glorify the Starks making it another Stark wank story. In my opinion Ned broke his promise to his sister the moment Jon felt so unwanted he felt the need to go to the night watch. Anyway my rant aside, thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

It's a very good start and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Personally I thought Ned's view of the Targaryen's was a bit much but if looked at as Ned having ptsd or something similar about the rebellion where he puts all the blame on the Targaryen's then it I think it's more understandable

Los Targaryen son locos e incompetentes que se creen dioses y pueden matar violar y robar lo que quieran.
Como si Robert fuera el unico borracho y prostituto de Westeros. Lyanna nació noble nunca tuvo que esforzarse por mostrar su valia y piensa que puede juzgar a su hermano por luchar por su vida y vengar a su familia.
Como si fuera la unica mujer atrapada en un compromiso indeseado.

I personally like the way this started off, the MC is a Targaryen fanboy but that’s honestly perfectly fine. He’s a Targaryen King so if he didn’t have any semblance of respect for his ancestors and only followed the Stark family/ was only proud of them then it would’ve been cringe to read. Either way I can’t wait to see how Daeron gathers an army and hatches a Dragon. Or is he going to try to find Cannibal? Either good start, I can’t wait for the next update.

howland is super ooc here and you are way targaryan fanboy with lyanna cause remember the targaryans killed both lord Rickard and lord Brandon stark Lyanna's father and brother respectively,but her weird devotion to the targaryans can be put to not knowing how they died or her unreasonable hatred towards Robert,but the si's hatred seems super fanboy which is a big turn off to readers