Why would Lorch know about the House Lannister dirty laundry concerning Tyrion? Or why does Tygett not know his brother got his children killed?

If a lick spittle like Lorch who wasn't even there knows. How come Tyrion doesn't? Not like he is supposed to be smart ... and stuff like that is usually shared as gossip.

Knowledge that if released at the right time into the right ears would result in House Lannister destroying itself.

I have to wonder did you consider the implications of Lorch knowing this at all?

meh after so long we had a chapter and was a bad one!

Rhaegar's grandmother was Blackwood. The combination of Targaryen,Blackwood and Stark the 3 lines known for Greensight or Dragon Dreams for the Targaryens

I have always greatly enjoyed this story and am very excited to see it’s still being updated I hope t continues im a big fan of this work of yours author. Wish you well in life till next time

He gets beaten up by his sister always hitting him, he has a dragon in winter fell, why don't he just go cut his own head off! Why is he such a a wimpy little shit?!

Just a reminder, the gold coin Galleon is from Harry Potter, ASOIAF and Game of Thrones use the gold coin Dragon.

Not sure if it was intentional or not, but Galleons are the monetary system of Harry Potter. In ASoIaF the coinage used is Gold Dragons, Silver Stags, and Copper Stars

Well that was shorter then I'd hoped. Almost thinking I should wait until two chapters are posted to get a good read. Because by the time I got to the end of this chapter I was really looking forward to what's next only to abruptly stop. Also I'm perfectly fine with Jon and Visenya using their magic, and the starks not having any. Because it being unique to them is the whole dang point. For series about magic returning to the world there is a criminally short amount of stories of main characters having magic. Yours is a breath of fresh air, just wish the chapters were longer.

Then there is the part that Tywinn hasn't cornered Jon yet to try and haggle for Nightfall. Which is really the main reason Tywinn even came to the north to get the valayrian blade.

good :)

Your story started off well enough... but i think there is too much backseat driving happening here...

Imo...People don't read ff to rehash characteristics of canon ... but to see something/someone different ... yes even in asoiaf world

This story tried that several times... but don't know whether it was the comments or not enough fleshing out the characters or wanting to speed up to canon events.. those plot points were left hanging

Having read Phantom before... i can say that was a good ff... though there are points there as well that pacing is too quick... but still i like that ff... so tried this

Started off well enough... but I don't think, even you know what your MC really thinks of Starks... the apathy and anger is fine in the beginning...heck i don't mind targ wank either(dragons enough said)... but you kinda are making him too much of a 1d character... despite growing old... he is becoming more close minded and canon like...

There are honestly to many hand outs and the idea that he can just manipulate ice when no other stark can just feels childish. I also genuinely hope you aren’t actually having ned pick Robert over the twins cause he never did that at any point.

Great chap

Pretty great chap

Pretty great chap

Pretyy good chapter