Reviews for Quarian's Wizard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione certainly didn't bother to wait before dropping another bomb on them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione is really throughout. Though Harry is nowhere close to be able to use that room properly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Colin Creevey of all people destroying the Magical world... talk about irony. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wotan is Sirius, isn't he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! There is no female Doctor, just an aberration from a parallel universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Liberator would have been fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a crap! I mean, nice story so far, but your Harry isnt consistent. he wins the war, he works at the Department of Mysteries for a few years, but couldnt use a proper hex or spell in Saren, that would kill him or put him in great misery. Harry is a wizard, he can change the physical world just by his thoughts. But in your Story, this Harry acts like an reckless child without any skill in magic or combat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this so far! I'm sure it's been said, but I can't help but chime in. Asperger's was removed because it was associated with some pretty bad people and ideas. So, autistim is now understood to be a wide spectrum. Off to the next chapter, thank you again for this wonderful fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter didn't really do it for me. I don't deny that Harry can act impulsively, but Tali also broke cover and got herself into danger. Tali's injuries are more Tali's fault than Harry's. I am a bit confused/concerned at the lack of detail on Harry's magic and combat. I know you don't want him either overpowered or underpowered, but right now things just feel inconsistent in terms of whether his magic is effective or not. |
![]() ![]() sequal please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing. Not real sure about Mass Effect as I've only read a few crossovers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My only and very minor quibble is that, given the situation, BACK TO THE FUTURE wouldn't be as fitting background music as that of STARGATE. However, I will grant that Back to the Future has likely been seen by far more people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it quietly amusing how our opinions on the Asari melding differ. I mean, given by an earlier AN and then Harry's reaction, you clearly don't like the eye thing. ..I legit think it's hot lol. While Tali is my second favorite romance (barely I above Garrus ironically) Liara is hands down leagues ahead haha. Welp, your mileage may vary in all things! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when your notes are longer then the actual chapter, stop writting notes. interesting story but actual chapters too short and notes at end are way too long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Legion! I loved that bot. |