Reviews for A New Player in the Force: The Gathering Storm
ShadowFire3473 chapter 24 . 22h
Joined the patreon just to see if the 2 chapters are available. At the lowest tier (about $15 with some change per year). This story does not offer early access to the 2 chapters as promised. So take it with a grain of salt and expect to pay more if you want to read 2 first drafts ahead.
Rafael Lopez chapter 17 . 9/26
He’s been having that for the greater good mentality for some time now.
Deitybringer3101 chapter 24 . 9/24
" While she had a 0.7-rated hyperdrive, doing the mental calculations, it seemed we'd arrived as if she had a 0.6-rated hyperdrive. It was a minor improvement, but given most ships had 1.5-rated or higher hyperdrives, it was most impressive. "

I don't see how this is supposed to be an improvement as she is both slower than she was originally supposed to be, and also slower than most other ships making her one of if not the slowest spaceship.
dan.lew.upg chapter 24 . 9/21
cant wait for more
Guest chapter 24 . 9/18
And so it begins. Awesome chapter and love that Cam's used his authority on the Lokella, you definitely don't want to leave yourself undefended. Brilliant writing as always, look forward to the next pne! Take care of yourself
handwran chapter 10 . 9/19
well this arcs torture plot device sure was forced and badly written. why so many authors feel the need to nerf their mcs and remove agency Ill never understand. the rest of the fic is good but id reccomend skipping this arc
Raiju001 chapter 24 . 9/19
Hahaha! I was expecting the force to sneak Ani in somehow but I was surprised by the other. And dang, to see such a large force assemble... Trade Federation done goofed!
Ryan Chessman aka Crys chapter 24 . 9/19
Jeez, quite the harem he's building.

All the pieces are falling into place for this step. What he's ignoring is the possibility that the two Alors he was so worried about are plotting to put him on the Mandalore throne. Especially if he pulls this battle off as well as he very well might.

Wouldn't that throw Palpatine's plan for him into a spin?

Very much enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter!
Nai Darkor chapter 24 . 9/19
Episode 1, yay!
Help me, Cameron Shan! You are my only hope.
THAT is fanservice…
Verdauga chapter 24 . 9/18
This pleases me. I find the droids and Raven's pickiness of fuel amusing.
Verdauga chapter 24 . 9/18
Okaze chapter 24 . 9/18
I'm seriously excited for this next chapter. Having the Lokella, the Mandos, Bo, and Serra all along for the ride along with the hilarious humor of HK and R2 is going to make for an incredible, hilarious, and badass experience.
Verdauga chapter 23 . 9/18
Verdauga chapter 23 . 9/18
MalSer chapter 24 . 9/18
Next stop... Naboo! Really looking forward to it!
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