I feel like you've spelled "Dolores" seven different ways throughout this story

Please come back !

It was interesting at first but i soon lost interest with too many girls in the harem. It just feels excessive at this point

No matter how many times I read this story, it is still cracking me up.
I hope Author San picks this back up.

Ok that ending few sentences was both awesome and bittersweet

a common troupe; Astoria has a blood curse ailment, usually puts her in poor health.
Gabriele Delcour is bound by Life Debt in fourth year.
skipping Vane completely.

these are a few of my thoughts on the thirteen witches of Harry Potter.

things I would like to see fleshed out...
Cissi and Charley...
Sirius's Serious witch hunt.

but mostly... just More of the same please

With Harry's luck, I'm surprised Hedwig hasn't figured out how to turn herself human (or ar least harpy) to add to the coven

If she hadn't already taken a grenade to the face, I could easily see a scene in the aftermath of the trials with the Dementors drawing lots to see which one has to deal with the Umbitch

I could just see a "wizarding authority" (one of the Tonks family) commenting within petunia's hearing something that heavily implies the "reason Dudley's magic hadn't been detected earlier" was that it was being drained to power the wards on the house due to "some incompetent fool" forgetting that because the house belongs to the Dursley family, the wards anchored to the only magical Dursley in the house, and the only found out because the wards only broke when Vernon kicked Harry out.

Please don't abandon this story! I have experience with characters having minds of their own and taking over, but this is too original an AU setup to leave unfinished. If I can offer advice, just every day or two, it down and write. Some call it "pantsing" but it is actually a technique called "Writing into the dark" and is used by professional authors. In between let your subconscious chew on the story and when you write, just tell the story it has come up with.

Nice Ghost Busters reference.

If that ladt bit doesn't illustrate how different this Dudley is, nothing will. Damn, but he's right.

I'm pretty sure Britney Spears was relatively unknown in 1993, I'm not even sure if she was a Mouseketeer at that time or not.

I gotta say that I am teally enjoying your writing style, the way you turn phrases is simply masterful.

"Then be a good lad and ask my secretary out on a date."
lol

but

"Our new potions . . ."