Cute story and made me smile since its Luna.

For such a short crossover, this was a very fun read. There was another one that I read where Luna did something similar, but it connected to the gate in Antarctica, where Sam and Jack were stuck and helped them out…

I really loved tthis story , i only wished that it could have been longer.

Seriously good work yet again. Not a single miss. Yes they're all rather short so its easier not to screw up. Though the fact they're all really good rather than simply not bad every time is definitely something praiseworthy.

I read this story after the House of Healing Souls where you hint at it. I would love to read a longer story with SG1 and Luna

Love this and was hoping for more and MORE to Jack and Luna, pairing? Hahahaha..

I know it's only a one-shot, but this really speaks to me as the pilot to a much longer cross-over.

Anyway, a great read (even fifth or m,ore times around). Thankyou.

This was AWESOME! and it was cool to have it referenced in the Healing House story was great as well.

Thank you for all your effort!

Luna is one of my favorite characters, good story.

That was a fun romp.

I'd have to look if I have reviewed before, but since I found this I've read it three times already. It is so funny! Luna is just the best!

And she got her badge. So sweet. And her pudding. Probably sweet as well.

Very entertaining!

ok, thanks. now I have half-formed head-story(/ies) of Jack somehow getting de-aged or reincarnated or whatever and ending up as Luna's big brother and him being there/going through and changing the Harry Potter series..
the whatever could include him somehow getting dropped into the potterverse in the same accident that killed Luna's mother, and him being there to comfort her and help her through it, and then somehow at the end of the story adult Luna is there to help Jack when his son shot himself when playing with Jack's gun.
sometimes I wish I was an author rather than a dreamer or at least could better put the ideas into paper/digital form, but the ideas are too fluid and mutable as I (day)dream them up the fit into the rigid concrete of a written story. but I can share snippets like here in the hope someone may read them and be inspired

so good! you're style of writing is awesome please please please write more!

Very good.