Reviews for A World Away |
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![]() ![]() Hey Arthur I just want you to know wonderful Story So Far can't wait to see what else you do with it! However I'm going to get to the point I and a bunch of others probably just want to know if you're alive and okay. I mean yeah last update wasn't that long ago in the grand scheme of things but it has been quite a bit at the same time. This is both a asking if there's going to be another update check and a wellness check. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here we go again with this nonsense, It's been years now since J.K.R Made it perfectly clear that The only ones in the world of Harry Potter that rely on wands to use magic is Europeans and Americans. For like 90% of the magical world witches and wizards use wandless magic, they see wands as useful tools but prefer to use Wandless magic. All the magical schools around the world except for the ones in Europe and America teach their students how to use Wandless magic, They don't use wand and they don't use any other external focus. Even without J.K.R Saying what you did it is stupid to think that they would need some external item in order to use the power they are born with they're literally born with magic flowing through every single cell in their body why would they need an external item to use that power? How does that make any sense fanfiction writers need to stop looking for facts in other fan fiction at least read the source material first before you come to the conclusion of the things you need to change. In the freaking books every single witch or wizard performs accidental magic so why would it be possible to use magic without any external item as a child and yet for some reason when they become adults they're unable to do the same thing how does that make any sense? |
![]() ![]() Ohkay, im hooked. I just binge-read it all and need some more. So please go on, the story has a splendid flow. :D Sendind love and well-wishes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would love another update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying your story man and i read the comments from pincho, some people don’t appreciate world building but for something like Harry Potter/The witcher that goes a long way. Personally im hoping this ends up being a really long story and goes into a lot of depth! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Ok I am done. This chapter unfortunately killed the last of my interest. Hope all is well for you in this new year, and hope to see the white boy story continued one day. |
![]() ![]() I honestly hope the rest of the story doesn't drag on so long. I'm sorry I am just finding this extremely boring. It's like a slow slice of life with pieces missing here and there because it was either not thought of, deemed unimportant, or would derail your take on canon plot line. Quite frankly I wish you were back writing the HP/MCU story. It had details but moved steadily along always progressing. |
![]() ![]() Wizards that don't work at the bank or get permission are not allowed to do magic in the bank. Dumbledore told him before pulling a sack out of his robes as well as his wand. With a quick wave, coins from various stacks started floating before flying over and started to quickly fill the sack. |
![]() ![]() Soo it only took Dumbles a year and a half to tell Harry anything of import about his family. You can, as a matter of fact. As the last living member of the Potter line, you are allowed to take up the headship at the age of 13 which will give you full control of your estate should you wish it. Yo |
![]() ![]() Sooo, who takes care of the Manor, let alone kept it livable for 10 years? Just saying if it is going to be slice of life it's an important detail. Just feels like something forgotten and ignored like nature magic and the earthquake. |
![]() ![]() Poor Harry still a pushover. |
![]() ![]() I hope that later the story explains why no one has ever noticed his magic. Is someone covering up the previous accidental magic done in public, or is everyone just that stupid? The wards on his aunts home, do they monitor anything or just keep Voldyshorts and his slaves out? |
![]() ![]() I'll be honest, I hope that if you write about Harry's Hogwarts days you make it as different as possible, on the other hand it can be the same as canon (for the most part) if you skip all but the things that change. Otherwise this will be a very boring story. |
![]() ![]() I love this story so far. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() Holy mother of peak, loving your novel |