Reviews for A World Away
MERK FOX chapter 34 . 5/31/2024
I love this story so much and I really hope you update it soon
Silverwingzz chapter 11 . 5/20/2024
So hedwig just doesn’t exist or something?
Ladis11 chapter 34 . 4/13/2024
I love the story, the slow build up on both sides leading up to their fights against the wild hunt and voldemort as well as their relationship slowly changing... And i know Harry is nowhere near ready to help Ciri ans that he'll likely need to fight his own battles before ge gets there but, at the same time, i can't help but wish they could juste go ahead and fight side by side. But then again, it will make their meeting that much better if more time passes
ironhair chapter 28 . 4/11/2024
I didn't like harry showing the ritual to Daphne
ironhair chapter 1 . 4/5/2024
Reading
Vortozan chapter 10 . 4/1/2024
Ok, Harry the magic prodigy and Ciri the warrior badass merging mind and soul sounds like a really bad thing… for their respective enemies .
Like holy shit they are gonna destroy Voldemort and The Wild Hunt. Also I love the way you’ve portrayed Dumbledore and Minnie. Very original and fun to read about the interactions they have with Harry.
Thank you for the amazing read. You’re a legend!
- Vortz
adamdavidmills111996 chapter 34 . 3/16/2024
Can we please get more of this?
wiam-s chapter 34 . 3/14/2024
I really like this fanfiction as much as the swollow and the dragon 2 of my favourites, I can't wait for Ciri and Harry to meet face to face
There is one error I found however: The name Perenelle is sometimes written as Penelope, I found it written 5 times.
Although I wish you'd update more frequent or faster. Ah well.
Good luck and I wish you the best
Sanders7201 chapter 1 . 3/5/2024
any updates coming? this is an amzing story and i miss reading it
Vanessa Masters chapter 24 . 2/25/2024
"I feel… I feel very good actually. My entire body feels very light. I don't think I have felt this light in years actually." Albus said as he looked down and seemed to be examining himself. Harry nodded.

"It doesn't de-age you back to your prime or anything but because of the way its all-encompassing, it heals a lot of the rust, as it were, on the body and gives it something like a tune-up. It pretty much puts your body in as good of condition as it can possibly be."

"At my age, I'd say that is almost worth more than the healing. I feel like I could run a mile right now." Albus said as he walked over looking a little peppy as he did so. Strange considering how calm he normally did.

"I'd bet. I did call it healing earlier but in truth, it is closer to regeneration. The Ritual can identify even missing body parts and restore them. As long as the target isn't brain dead, they can likely be brought back to full health… Well, what do you think?" Harry asked.

"I think If you tell our resident healer, you made this, she will hound you for the rest of your life." Albus answered. Harry smiled and rolled his eyes.

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Very great.

Also, important talk with Ciri about how they feel.

Oh, it's Triss, huh.
Vanessa Masters chapter 23 . 2/25/2024
"Ah, well, I used to have someone who used to teach me and he was magical. Everyone should be capable of magic on some level so when Harry asked, I asked him how one would gain access to magic. After that I just passed it along."

"Anyone can use magic where you come from?" Neville interrupted.

"Anyone has the possibility but if you're not born with the natural ability, the kind of magic you can learn is limited, usually to nature magic. Those who fall into this category are druids. They can be powerful but, as I said, they are limited." Harry answered that one once more.

"Yep, that." Ciri finished.

"You could have let her say it." Hermione scolded.

"I could've but she would not have said it in the same way." Harry said poking fun at his friend.

"I WILL stab you. Birthday or no." Ciri threatened, brandishing a kitchen knife at him.

"Apologies, it won't happen again." Harry backed down, feigning fear causing his other friends to chuckle.

"Better not… So, I know about the stuff Harry has been doing, what about you all? Do you also get involved in random and crazy projects?"

"I haven't yet." Hermione answered first.

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I'm so glad they meet at last.

The way magic is used, strange, but intriguing.

Hermione doesn't care much for the potions used on Ciri, and witchers.

Oh! Ciri kissed Harry! O.o
Vanessa Masters chapter 22 . 2/25/2024
"Hmm. So, I was reading through the Occlumency book and it was speaking how Legilimencers can enter someone's mindscape in which they can peruse through ones experiences. Is that correct?" She suddenly asked. He frowned at the quick change of subject not sure where his friend was going with this. He thought on it for a moment before nodding in confirmation.

"Yes, why?"

"Well, I was thinking, if you and Ciri shared a mindscape, could we not simply use Legilimency on you and enter your mindscape to meet there?"

"…"

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Oooh!

Hermione is brilliant.

Intrigue.

And duel between Minerva and Harry, it went quite good

Oh, Dumbledore wants to share about Voldemort.
Vanessa Masters chapter 21 . 2/25/2024
"Yes, that was something. Such a sum of money can do much for a family like the Weasleys. And young Ronald has the means to make further profits if he wishes, which shall be nice. It was nice of him to give half his profit to his family."

"I wasn't expecting that, though I did believe he would find some way to take care of them… It was quite a stroke of luck that this was his first creation with Alchemy. Did you ever figure out what went wrong with his experiment that turned them into Wardstones?"

"Indeed, while I have taken an oath that prevents me from going into specifics, I will say that Mr. Weasley seemed to have made some minor alterations to the stones he was using in hopes to prevent them from being destroyed by the rapid influx of magic. The equation formula he used though was not what he thought it was as it is instead used to balance magic and adding it seemed to prevent an overflowing build up but seemed to allow a perfect balance to be reached within the stone for enough time for the magic to carve a permanent storage component within the stone."

"That's interesting. Though it seems a little simple, for someone to have not applied and tried already."

"Ah, you misunderstand. Mr. Weasley's unexpected success was a combination of several things he did right that just happened to mesh correctly with the one thing he did wrong. He actually did a lot of unnecessary things within his equations in an effort to make sure there was enough magic for a permanent transmutation. He had the opposite problem many new budding alchemists face when beginning on their journey. Instead of using too little magic, he used too much." Dumbledore explained. Harry nodded in understanding.

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That explains it.

And hey, the mistake ended up helping Ron and his family financially.
Vanessa Masters chapter 20 . 2/25/2024
"Nice. Nice. Speaking of, how is Ciri?" Neville asked. Harry nodded.

"She is doing well. Her training has been going well and I believe Geralt, her guardian, has summoned a sorceress to come and check her out to maybe find out what was trying to possess her. I think they will arrive in a couple of months since they have to by foot."

"No Apparition huh?"

"No, unfortunately. They do have portals but you need to have a destination in mind. The sorceress has apparently never been to where Ciri is currently located. Even worse, it's deep and hidden in the mountains. If you don't know where you're going, it's easy to get lost. At least, that's what Ciri told me."

"Well, that's something, I suppose. I hope it's nothing serious… Make sure you give her our best." Neville said with a nod. Harry nodded back in acknowledgement.

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Glad she's doing okay.

Yeah, apparition, or portals? Which beats which?

Also, Ron making low wardstones.

He's going to make a tidy sum and his mother so happy he has accomplished alchemy.

Huh, well, Neville's Gran isn't flavor of the month with Harry, bur better than some.
Vanessa Masters chapter 19 . 2/25/2024
"What do you mean? Are you saying you have a magical bond with someone?" Neville asked. Harry blinked at that. A magical bond? He had never heard of such.

"What's a magical bond?"

"Pretty much what it sounds like, a bond between two peoples magic that connects them in some way." Neville explained. Harry frowned at that. He and Ciri were mostly connected mentally. The magical connection was mostly in the existence of that mental connection, none of their other actual magic was connected. At least not from how Neville described it.

"Maybe? I would need more details. Our bond is mostly mental but our magic is mostly separate. The magical portion is really just in the formation of the mental link." Harry said back.

"That could be one. As I said, they form in different ways. There's not really much information about them besides some basic facts like what I already said because they vary so much. The only common one is a wedding magical vow bond that some of the older families still use." Neville explained back.

"Hmm well, as I said, it's possible but I can't be sure. Anyway, I am connected to another person, she's a girl near our age named Cirilla, or Ciri for short." Harry explained once more. Neville and Ron looked interested all of a sudden and Hermione looked speculative.

"A girl? What does she look like?" Ron asked with some excitement. Neville nodded his head showing he wanted to know the answer to that to. Harry frowned at the sudden interest, though he wasn't sure why it bothered him. Either way,

He acquiesced to their demands and conjured an illusion of Ciri. He used her in her normal shirt and trouser outfit to showcase them. He certainly wasn't planning to show anyone what she looked like in her dress from the other night.

"Wow! You have a connection with some like that? She's super pretty!" Ron exclaimed as he looked at the illusion.

"I have to agree with Ron. She has a very exotic look to her with her hair and eye combo. Where is she from and are her looks natural?" Neville asked.

"She's from Cintra and yes her looks are natural though, no they are not common." Harry explained as he dispelled the illusion of her. He couldn't help but give a hard stare at Ron who had been drooling all over the illusion. He did not like that.

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Well, Harry tells the group about ciri, but worried about this force that pushed into their mind.
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