Reviews for A World Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thats the school year wrapped up! It's so great to see Ron take pride in his own work and setting himself apart from the rest of the family! Next year is going to be a blast of new events, and I'm super excited for the summer wandless magic practice. His friends learning how to not rely solely on wands may just safe their life. Especially if they are illusionary and have been disarmed! Amazing chapter ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() They took the the knowledge of Ciri really well! Hm I'm thinking the presence possessing Ciri is her abilities manifesting is my personal idea of what's going on. Story is going at such a good pace! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite the experience Harry gave Ciri, it was so very beautiful and hilarious with how Ciri was unapologetically herself haha That mental barrier being crushed was worrying though especially since the implications is on Ciris side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the lore building with runes and how it would integrate with rituals. Little hint about Harry's plan to help Ciri is interesting though I wouldn't be surprised if it became redundant when Ciri could travel worlds later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh it isn't the end of the year... I forgot it's only Christmas, usually the defeat of quirrel is just at the end of the year and it didn't occur to me he was defeated earlier in the year. It's nice Neville gotten his own wand and I love the accentric personality writers give Olivander and this particular iteration was very amusing. Ciri honing her technique in the mindscape as well as the waking world? She's gonna be even tougher! I love the familiarity Minerva and Dumbledore share with Harry to spend Christmas with him ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that concludes the end of year one! Other then the train ride anyway. I was wondering what was the illusion but I instantly understood as soon as Harry gotten the stone and the Headmaster right after. It was a good trick to fool Tom l. I loved this chapter nise way to wrap up the first year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was unexpected! Didn't think this Harry would kill the mountain troll. It's an interesting vergence for sure. Hm and now Ciri and Harrys mindscape are melding even more to feel physical sensations as real. Interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's awesome to see Harry so open with his friends and how inclusive he is towards Ron and Neville. Trusting those outside of his immediate circle of Ciri or Dumbledore. I love seeing his patience with those that may not be mentally inclined as he may be, he doesn't see anyone else as less like many intellectual individuals tend to do either consciously or subconsciously. Enjoyable chapter! |
![]() ![]() I am surprised that you didn't post this on Ao3, this so well written that it would get a steady following! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t tell you how excited I was to see a new chapter from you, and for this story in particular. It was such an enjoyable chapter, thank you for the hard work, and I will continue looking forward to the next chapter to see where you take things.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Thanks for the update! Been really enjoying this fic (and all your others). I am a little confused with how you're going the progress this fic. There's a lot to go for both Harry and Ciri story arcs and it could end up being too much, like when some authors try to rewrite Harry Potter but with MORE (takes some serious dedication to pull that off for free as a hobby). Suffice to say, I'm interested in how you'll proceed with this fic without it feeling too rushed or too booged down/ambitious. Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry, who the fuck is Penelope? You mean Perenelle Flamel, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() FANTASTIC chapter! I really love how the quality of narrative and prose both are so consistently good throughout the story, especially now that it has hit 34 chapters! Thanks for the update! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter~~ |