Reviews for A World Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good re read to remind myself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I just came here to check for an update but I almost lost hope. I never expected that to be honest but thank you very much! The chapter is nice. I hope that the next update will come sooner than this one. I dont know if you know, but the email you have in your bio misses the . I can very much understand that you dont want to have any of your email public like that. I hope you have a great day! Limic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huzzah! More AWA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a thought that came to mind, if your planning to do the resurrection ritual at the end of 4th year, you could have Harry curse Voldemort through his blood. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m glad we got to see the rest of the club introduced! Thanks for the chapter! I look forward to reading the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda frustrating to see Neville beating Harry like that. Doesn't make any sense at all considering the FAR greater amount of time Harry puts into his magic and his supposed prodigious skills. Not much evidence for those skills existence if limp dick longbottom can give him a thrashing. Just felt really jarring and out of place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was kinda hoping yennefer or triss would make a unexpected appearance in their mindscape this chapter. I mean ciri told them about harry already didn't she? Love how neville and hermione are sort dancing around each other, cant wait to see what happens between them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great to see an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story this is usually where things fall apart in these kind of stories. You really forced him to interact with Ron and Hermione and Neville. I was really hoping that he wasn’t going in a wrap with any of those characters. This is a different Harry and yet there was a little different but the fact that Harry Potter canon was a loser with no self-respect. He latched onto the first person that was. This Harry Potter has a little bit more self-respect and should not wish to interact with Ron since he has no social skills at all. Same with the other two. I’m hoping this is the last time he interacts with these three. There are 100 more children interactive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am surprised at how the pure-blood princess is acting...meaning Daphne. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter can’t wait for the next one and this is a great early birthday present since my bday is tomorrow lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun chapter. Thanks! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Harry needs to get stronger and more versatile and stop relying on illusion so much unless he really does get to the point where he can change illusion to reality to actually harm his foes and help himself instead of just tricks at this point. The Witcher Universe is too dangerous not to be really strong especially with the Wild Hunt Around. |