Reviews for A World Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter i liked the interactions and im surprised the fact about her actually being a princess wasnt mentioned i can only imagine some of their reactions and teasing harry would get |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty nice with how this went here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realised (or at least i think just now) that by sparring with Ciri, with time Harry will only improve as a swordsman and while he may not become a master swordsman, he will be more than good enough fighting with a sword (I mean, he trains with THE Ciri) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story so much! Thanks for another great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter, im enjoying reading this but I have one problem and its that I don't see when is harry going to travel to the other world and met with Ciri. it just seem that its very far away and you are not advancing fast enough, not that that is a problem but that is the thing that im most excited to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh your dialogue is so damn dry in this fic. its like ppl rattling off a list just to get it done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() What eve is the point of adding that fanon made political bs, like ancient and noble houses and all that fanon made silly looking etiquette. It can make sense in some political stories, but this clearly isn't one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So then are Ron, Neville and Hermione goind to do full disclosure talk? It shouldn't be a one way street if they call themselves his friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A bit overdramatic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() George Lucs would be proud of that library dialog. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting and detailed story. I really enjoyed reading this. Huge thanks for writing it, and again for posting it here for us to read your writings. Looking forward to future chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() can u delete this shit? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cringe shit |