Reviews for Just a Shinobi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please continue this. It's one of my favorite stories of yours |
![]() ![]() ![]() … Esdeath huh, I’d have preferred you just make Rei her own character instead of just giving her an already established identity for her vigilante get up this just feels so uninspired and cheap compared to everything else you had going on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this stroy. Keep up the greta work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue the story, it is well done and fun. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I discovered your story today! I always randomly discover your stories and devour them immediately and completely. This one is as good as all the rest, so it looks like I will be getting less sleep! Thank you for continuing to write and trying new things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo Neon. ShagLadd. Good ta see ya. A few things happened here that I wanna mention. 1. Naruto "Talk-No-Jutsu" Uzumaki NOT good at SPEECHES? ... Somehow fits. He's a passionate sore of the moment kinda guy. 2. He said that stuff, bro. The best shit because it's REAL Shit. Nice work. 3. These little tender touches: the familial moments, Tenko's fanboying, Toya's contrarianism & the harmless bickering banter, reassuring Fuyumi & Natsuo, lovely stuff. 4. I won't lie: Knowing that "Mirko Calling Shit's Fucked", Her being a Brat (more than likely wanting daddy to discipline her) & passing a warning of Ryukyu & All Might on his ass since the HPSC ain't shit, Naruto laughing because, "Fuck it, might as well happen." while chomping at the bit & spoiling for a fight? Then "Who wants Ice Cream before I Brawl a Dragon?" THAT was a Fucking EXCELLENT touch. I can't wait to see more. Much Love, ShagLadd |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, and must see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, as long as this doesn’t get too explicit. Your stories are some of the few with sexual content that I don’t mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() I deeply respect Mirko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should have known she’d let rabbit instincts go crazy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And, add in Curious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep on forgetting how ridiculously tough Naruto is |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good grief. So far, he’s seduced Rei, Kaina, and Inko, and I’d bet my right arm Yu and Rumi are next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rei looks cool, and I wouldn’t go near Kizuki with a ten-foot spear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I’m beginning to see why I see more Naruharem stories than any other anime protagonist. |