Reviews for Just a Shinobi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There are villains that Naruto can change after all without a evil person there is no story to follow a Hero needs a antagonist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Endeavor is a jerk in the story with himself and his children, and was fully responsible in the creation of a villain. This character doesn’t endear myself he domestically abused his wife and treated his children like crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Quirk that this person has is very dangerous almost uncontrollable in a way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tenko in Academia became a ruthless villain that killed many people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto will have a rough time dealing with this society Heroes have a code against killing, and everything here is controlled by rules. |
![]() ![]() Enjoyed the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shes really getting the feelings, its good to see this story back its been a while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked the chapter. Hoping to see more chapters soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chpater if a compact one. thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot woot, an update! Glad to see it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() increíble capítulo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm not a bad chapter, it was a good lime but not enough action for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah finally the last chapter for now...it was a good read, good thing i have another good read up next, "shed no grace on me" Anyways, i really thought you meant rei brought out Naruto compassion, nagant brought out kindness, curios brought out the desire for the truth and Mirko brought out the savage within Naruto... Honestly, it'd be awesome if all Naruto girl's have powers and are strong, afterall with all the enemies Naruto have...having a weak wife is a no no. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh, this was a satisfying chapter. A good fight and a good amount of intimacy, a perfect read because of the added lime. That and doing it after a spar or battle is just really plain hot. Nice work NZ, now if only there would be more of this limes in your fics and maybe even LEMONS... Anyways, good chap my fellow man of culture. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, great scenes with the gal's so far now if only there's a lemon...seriously, i haven't read a new lemok in a while now so please upgrade this to rated M and do lemon. Anyways, so far there is rei, nagant, curious, mountain lady and Mirko in the harem...will Nana be there aswell? Cuz that woman deserves to be saved |