Reviews for continuing an age long tradition (that is killing your own parents!)
emmawave1 chapter 1 . 3/7/2023
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catspats31 chapter 1 . 10/4/2021
Since it has the copied lyrics of "Middle Finger" by Bohnes, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.
parallaxyt chapter 1 . 9/30/2021
...freaking hell, I had no idea you could write this well. I am genuinely fucking impressed. Like, its really that good. And yeah. I'd even call it Wombat-esque ;)
The Last Centurion 1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2021
This was really well written, the song tied perfectly with the story and you used all the right words too. I know it's only a one-shot but it would have been awesome to have some more details about what was happening, I say that because the idea was really interesting, I have never read a fic where demigods directly overthrow the gods to become new rulers... still I feel like the vaugeness goes really well with the theme of your fic so overall it's a job well done.