Reviews for Stumbling through Godhood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think it would be hilarious if 12 years in the future he is sitting with his wives during a school competition of his new school and an 11 year old kid kerbstamps the competition with nothing but super human speed and strength. Darrow. "OH NO! Looks like the elves missed someone."): His wives turn looking at him.•••••• "It was before we were together. I swear!" •••••••••• "Yeh I'll have the test done to make sure." Mumbles under his breath as he makes his way from the private VIP box. "NZT I swear first time with the stuff and it never let's me forget." After he leaves Luna smiling says. "We are adopting him." The others just smile and all nod. "Good thing we convinced him on that binding when we married. We all read the myths. We need to avoid those disasters." Yes children from before we married is one thing. Children after however is a different matter alltogether." "There will be no wild demigods causing trouble." He'll have his own version of Mashle from the anime.(: At the same time, SG1 is watching from the stands. Thinking genetic engineering experiment? Maybe a super soldier. They're gonna try to save the kid by kidnapping him. Probably a few of the Hak'tar children as well. After which Darrell takes the United States, SGC and SG1 to court for terrorist activity, kidnapping, and entering a foreign country without a passport. As well as any other thing he can think of. It would be hilarious to have an entire team of goblins show up with briefcases and begin legal proceedings to sue everyone in the SGC. Both Ms Weir and Halsey will have a fit. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling! |
![]() ![]() seriously why is the mcs personality obnoxious trash ? the story has great potential, but i want to beat the mc with a lead pipe , i would have dropped this shit if he did not sometimes dose mart and competent things ex.: getting ambrosia getting smart people to run his things , but sadly 90% of the time hes an obnoxious dumbass ... sigh ... i hope i can make it to the SG part of the story ... if there is one. |
![]() ![]() TRASH MC |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this continues soon! |
![]() ![]() If Darrow is searching for someone to help his elves tend his garden he might think of visiting the lord of the rings world. The Ents where masters at growing and taking care of trees. The Ent Wives where likewise masters at gardening. According to both JRR Tolkien and the lore inside the movies the wives where attacked and burned when they were teaching gardening to the humans and hobbits. So Darrow has an opportunity to get tree people to help tend his garden. Go to an earlier version of that universe save the wives and the hobbits they were teaching then go forward to after Isengard was destroyed and pick up the Ents that survived the battle. Then maybe visit Terra Nova. Add that colony world in the age of dinosaurs to his multiversal empire. It was 1 of those fairly decent shows that never really got a chance. It just got 1 season. Just like firefly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude went full Charlie sheen there, though at least he helped him bond with his people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thx. For the story, but I cant be bring myself more than 10 chapters . I always find something else to read. It feels like a wish fullfilment taken to 11, made slow paced, with slice of life fillers most of the time. I am sorry. Not for me. |
![]() ![]() Glad to see another chapter. So far the story is great. Others might complain about random spelling, personally when that happens with me (I blame it on spell check and autocorrect). I would swear autocorrect software has some form of monitoring subroutine in it that keeps track of where my eyes are looking. The moment I look away from the word I'm working on auto corrects it into something I don't intend or just erases it completely. As for the AU Stargate deviations. I'm not so sure they are as much of a deviation as you would think. In the canon of the Stargate show they're basically dealing with an entire multiverse and their universe is the only 1 that got all the plot armor. The other universes either ended bad for earth. Or they had to sacrifice a whole lot more to get a positive end. Even then the show main universe ended badly for everyone and everything that wasn't earth. As for the World of Warcraft movie universe. That sounds like a great idea. I think someone on here once posted that the armor from that universe is basically magical power armor. The Orcs are warlike though some of their tribes have a decent concept of honor. The fell shouldn't be as much of a problem as you would think. It shouldn't be too difficult for Harry Potter universe wizards or Darrow to figure out a detection magic for anyone under its influence, working for it, or not loyal to him. If he does detect it he could throw it at an enemy of his to get rid of it. Personally I would throw it at Star Trek Discovery let STD deal with it. Or throw it at Skynet in the terminator universe. Electronics based AI bent on destroying human life meet magic based electronic destroying demonic intelligence bent on destroying anything not under its control have fun with each other. In 1 fanfiction I read the dragon flights used a planeswalker to escape the Warcraft world because the bronze dragons found it a viable alternative to the other things that would happen to them in that world. They convinced the other dragon flights to go with them. The biggest problem with the World of Warcraft itself isn't the Fell it's the ancient Eldritch Gods imprisoned on the planet. Every faction that knows even a hint of that would rather be on a different planet in a different universe. This includes factions within both the Alliance and the Horde as well as non affiliated factions like the dragon flights. Besides it's good to give your protagonist some troubles he has to deal with from time to time, makes the story fun. Another universe that might be good for Darrow to interact with to get highly educated individuals possibly an entire colony world that is rich in natural resources however requires manufactured resources would be Terra Nova It's kind of a more hardcore science fiction version of Dinotopia which is also another universe he might want to visit. The premise of the show Terra Nova is that a future version of earth is dying and the people there use a particle accelerator to open a portal to another earth in a younger version of the universe, young enough to be in the age of dinosaurs. They're colony on that version of earth has plenty of natural resources. Lots of highly educated technological experts. However it's a very dangerous world and they need manufactured goods. Eventually before the end of the show they get cut off from their earth and can no longer get new colonists. On a positive note that's the type of world the Unas might thrive in. If Darrow ever comes across a few populations of Unas. Maybe werewolves to for that matter. A world seemingly custom-made to support large numbers of fast, strong, deadly, intelligent predators. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see some new things from different settings being introduced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Magical werewolf army is a go! |
![]() ![]() Pretty meh chapter, the length was ok suppose, but what's the fucking point of a ski resort... The only thing I can think of is tourism to have something to trade with other Goa'ulds but why would he want ti have others on his homeworld is beyond me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What do you mean MS aren't made for space battles? They were originally created for them but then turned to planetside battles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see another chapter. This time, it's a slice of life chapter with Darrow essentially spawning a frat party. I would wager 1 or 2 demigods will slip past the potion dispensers. A few years from now Darrow gets word that there's 2 or 3 super strong. Or fast children out there playing Catch with boulders. That's when he does, the (uh oh Pikachu face.) : Also. I had no clue there were ski resorts in Australia. I had to look that up. Snow and the continent of Australia just don't go together in my head. Of course, now I'm planning a ski vacation there. It looked like a lot of fun. I will say you are right and simultaneously wrong when it comes to admin capabilities being genetically inheritable. While no individual is born with inherent skill. (Unless you're working with genetic memory of course.;) Predispositions towards certain behaviors, which would make them positively inclined towards, as well as predisposed in their capabilities to doing such jobs are genetically inheritable. While I was still in University doing my studies and research for a PHD in bioengineering, they were still only scratching the surface on behavioral evolutionary genetics. They did manage to identify the so-called worship gene. The genetic trait that is responsible or appears at this point to be responsible for human spirituality and pre disposition towards religious worship. This gene is the (vesicular monoamine transporter 2 (VMAT2) gene.) Coincidentally, if you wanted to create your own Captain America's in the setting and have them be valid in real life, it would be these genes. (IGF-1) Gene for enhanced strength. (PPAR-Delta) Gene for enhanced endurance and speed. (Lin28a) for enhanced healing regeneration and a possible extension of lifespan. Specific inhibition of (Phosphodiesterase-4B) results Anxiolysis in and facilitates the acquisition of memory. A mutation in the (LRP5) that inhibits the use of one of those genes increases bone density and strength. Though I would speculate the physical enhancing gene modifications the Jaffa already possess. Or something similar if alien in origin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice slice of life chapter |