Awesome to have another chapter out and things are starting to get smoking hot.

Sejauh ini, ini adalah fanfic mass effect yang ditulis sangat baik, halus, dan masuk akal yang pernah saya baca. Membacanya seperti mengalir begitu saja. Tidak berlebihan dan tidak ada hal yang tidak masuk akal disana. Sangat bagus!

Fix, akan kumasukkan ke cerita favoritku

Seperti biasa, ditulis dengan halus dan indah. Aku suka Dewan Benteng tidak menjadi tidak masuk akal disini.

Sangat bagus, mengalir dan masuk akal. Tolong lanjutkan sampai selesai.

A very fun chapter. I look forward to more.

Here's to hoping Earth isn't home to a government that's Imperium of Man levels of stupid.

I’m wondering if Earth plays host to a hostile human nation hidden away from the galaxy. Something to contrast the best humanity has to offer in the Confederacy with our worst.

Maybe horrify the galaxy with what warfare is like when humanity fights itself.

Epic

if you have ever watched The Fat Electrician then you would know why I laughed at "proportional response" anyway it was a great chapter and I hope you continue

Interesting.

Amazing chapter

This chapter is SPOT ON with the non-combat scenes. I like the timeskip, and all the small moments, you did with Liara especially.

Okay, THIS is fun. Such a cool twist to things.

Thank you For the update. I am intrested If this might lead to new openings of Portals and the discovary of the original earth