Reviews for Four Conversations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this a lot. Of these conversations, I wish that the last two in particular had happened in canon. Harry was there when Ginny weaponized Hermione's "relationship" with Krum in her argument with Ron, and he could've told Hermione what set Ron off when she wondered aloud what she was supposed to have done to make Ron act the way he acted in most of that book. I'm not entirely sure why he didn't. As for the final conversation during the horcrux hunt, I feel like Hermione would have been too curious about what happened to let it go. Maybe she'd have waited to circle back around to it until after they survived the war and were no longer on the run/constantly on edge, but I think she would have been curious nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish it had a following conversation after the last one, but it's still good. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet! It would have been absolutely perfect if you managed to sneak in a kiss, but sometimes leaving things to imagination is better Please keep writing! |
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![]() ![]() Unfulfilling |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really nice. Good heart baring conversations are had to pull off, bit you did so nicely. I'd enjoy a gratuitous continuation, but such is unnecessary. (My interpretation of the firebolt incident is that Hermione's going straight to McGonagall is strongly related to Harry's unwillingness to tell any teachers about the map or the secret passageway.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I like this version of these events much better |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good read. It exposed perfectly the problem with their relationship over the years. |
![]() ![]() very nice, i always enjoy your writing. and interesting insight into why they wanted him to stay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was interesting and intense and i love it :D this really was what needed to happen... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Thank you for writing! |