For me the intro for Death was perfect, I could already visualize everything from the moment you described him. This version of Death is probably my favorite and the usage of the character was spot on.

I can't find your patreon even though I'm trying please send me the link or post it on ff

That entire scene with the goblins was cringe inducing, there is no way that they would kneel to him. They have been in mult wars with the goblins, it just wouldn’t happen like that. Amelia would be seen as a weakling. No head of state would kneel to another head, it just isn’t done.

The thing about this version of death was that the lineI'll reap Him too, eventually. scared the crap out of me. It literally gave me the same feeling I get from reading Revalations.

This is an exciting, captivating read. I discovered it today and read straight through to this point. I am very anxious to know what happens next.
It has all the best elements. The personalities are well developed and mature over the course of the story. The world building with it's creatures are fascinating.
The interactions between Harry and G have made me worry and then cheer for Harry. The author makes canon look like a cake walk. Harry really as been walking the edge of pit that could have damned him.

I love the bond between Harry and Megan. I look forward for the fight :-D

Lost interest when the black shadow was Grindelwald lol nah this is trash

Currently ine of the best harry potter stories ongoing. Thanks for all your hard work

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Amazing story. What Harry and his team are undertaking is incredible. Please update soon as I can't wait to see what happens next.

Very good story, and I hope you post the next couple chapters real SOON!

Well done!

update soon

Shit story. Abused, emotionally retarded harry who gets nerfed whenever the author pleased which ends up always aiding voldemort. The story is an overall shit show that shouldn't have even been written. Half the shit happening to Harry is so forced that it just plains out ruins the story.

Harry destroyed the horcrux on the school and bellatrix one? I’m lost about that part.