| Reviews for Harry Potter, Dark Legacy |
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   peggyjolaws chapter 1 . 8/26 please finish this l love it. |
| Charlee56 chapter 35 . 8/5 Now THIS is an EPIC! Harry as the heir to Grindelwald? Marvelous! Pure Genius! And the Grimoire as a kind of 'gateway' to near Merlin-level powers... just a breathtaking concept. All in all, both a familiar, if truly differing format, one that opened literary doors to new realms of different but recognizable feats of magicks. I can't wait for chapter 36! |
| Immaterium chapter 35 . 8/4 Another down, one more to go - and one mean demon :-D Good work, I look forward for the next |
| Charlee56 chapter 34 . 8/4 Epic. Truly... EPIC. The BEST BATTLE SCENE I've ever read! |
| Charlee56 chapter 32 . 8/4 Shades of "Supernatural"! |
| shade656 chapter 35 . 7/30 Did you forget in a previous chapter that Dumbledore told them that the Diadem was in the Room of Requirement, or that Nagini was thought to be a Horcrux too? I think this chapter and the previous ones, up to when Dumbledore turns himself in needs a rewrite, or you need to edit out the information Dumbledore gives them. |
| shade656 chapter 28 . 7/30 I like your story so far, but you made a major error in this chapter. In a previous chapter you mentioned that the Peverells line died out some 300 year ago. The Victorian era didn’t happen until 1820 to 1914. So how can Peverell’s Castle be in the Victorian style? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1 Nice, one of the better g.o.f grey stories I read so far! |
| Soul Sendant chapter 29 . 6/21 whore glorification trash with the fake virgin whores. harry is a simpy bitch who cant use magic transportation because he suffers from the stupidity of the teenage faggot whose pathetic fantasy this is. |
| Soul Sendant chapter 28 . 6/20 ah it is an ignorant fool writing this shit. he cant merge the money of different houses together they are seperate for a reason and always will be |
| Soul Sendant chapter 28 . 6/20 oh boy and harry has to have 5 wives as susan is heir to house bones and canot provide heirs to the potter, black, peverell, and grindelwald names. |
| Soul Sendant chapter 27 . 6/20 oh boy just leep up the good little doggy attitude you fucking pathetic trash mc |
| Soul Sendant chapter 26 . 6/20 kneeling to goblins? yeah fucking right |
| Soul Sendant chapter 24 . 6/20 harry would need four wives to be able to legally have four houses that he is responsible for raising heirs for and helping grow the four houses |
| Soul Sendant chapter 24 . 6/20 this faggot mc not accepting his responsibility like a little bitch |