|Reviews for Crime Pays|
| Monroe Smith chapter 2 . 6/25/2003
Very tight. like the action seens too, but be a little mor desriptive. Don't worry, I make the same mistake. Ver nice overall. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Please R&R 1 800 KILL YOU!
| Monroe Smith chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Pretty good start, do finish.