Reviews for Galactic Wizardry
marlastiano chapter 28 . 11/20/2024
:)
Fill-them-up chapter 28 . 11/20/2024
Yea you update it yea please keep upating it
Qhristhian chapter 28 . 11/20/2024
Desempeño muy ineficiente
Monster King chapter 28 . 11/20/2024
You are doing amazing work please continue the story it's amazing
avarath1 chapter 18 . 11/11/2024
Was the army of 20,000 construction droids they had stolen not enough?
GouberMan chapter 27 . 10/27/2024
If you get back to this story you need to reread your first couple of chapters. You lost sight of just you your Harry is. Also to mention his deal with death, the learning fast, you have decided just cause it’s a light saber to not let him learn fast. Or forget things he already learned and have stopped him from learning anything new.
bleachorange chapter 9 . 10/15/2024
The story isnt bad, per se, but its too episodic for me. If the intent was to have 'episodes' of the adventures of harry potter and his harem in star wars, i think you succeeded. I just end up scrolling past all the buck rogers adventure stuff hoping to see character development that doesnt happen off screen. The first few chapters were a little more my flavor in terms of character development, even if I wished some stuff werent skipped even then.

Overall, well written, but the story style and focus are not in my strike zone.
bleachorange chapter 4 . 10/15/2024
Hmmm. Feels a bit like a tabletop RPG campaign so far, sans a party. There is good stuff here and stuff that feels pretty iffy.
ryuofhi99 chapter 27 . 9/17/2024
love the work!
Randy Hartley1 chapter 27 . 9/15/2024
Soul Sendant is just a asshole. They're the reason people stop writing. no constructive criticism or advice on improving the story. just gradeschool insults and karen levels of pointless rudeness. good story Dasteiza. dont listen to those who are jealous of your skills. you did better than i have before. keep up the good work.
Soul Sendant chapter 18 . 9/8/2024
hell chinese novels are better than this shit
Soul Sendant chapter 18 . 9/8/2024
Im going back to reading stories from real people and not some fucking future rapists and pedophiles that are all that exist on this site and Ao3.
Soul Sendant chapter 14 . 9/7/2024
shaak ti is a trained jedi master with lots of experience she wouldnt be distracted by the sound of the body gitting the ground when she made it happen your a fucking ignorant douche.
Soul Sendant chapter 13 . 9/7/2024
this harry is pathetically ignorant and the weakest harry potter in fanfiction.
Soul Sendant chapter 13 . 9/7/2024
only a retard would write a 230 plus year old character who looks 25 and has the mentality and intelligence of a 14 year old pornhub addicted waste of space
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