Oka

I loved this story. What a fantastic, suspenseful read. Thank you, for sharing.

Knit

Such a perfect and fitting ending for a perfect story. The way you managed to pull this all off - and have all the characters be so incredibly in character - while establishing a world without anything supernatural is just awesome. I am so very grateful for this story and this experience. It was a wild ride and it touched me deeply. This story was my ray of sunshine when I desperately needed some light.

Thank you for sharing your light with the world.

Only one chapter left, I can’t believe it!

Your Alec reminds me a bit of „Simon“ from „Knight and Day“. Also, Agent Biers‘ first name shocked me! I never knew (or forgot) Riley‘s name was Biers! If I had known, I‘d have realised how much depth you gave this thought. Clearly, us readers would have suspected him immediately of being a bad guy!

I loved the Bella and Charlie reunion. It was beautiful. Thank you.

Ohhhh this is really very satisfying! It all seems to turn out so well. Such an amazing story, so balanced, so beautiful, but also there’s so much action! I am a bit scared to read the last chapters.
But hey… I cant always reread this story, right? ;)

WOAH! THE FUCK BELLA! Throwing herself in front of Edward… that‘s so… HER.
So absolutely Bella. I know she won‘t die, but I‘m still terribly afraid for her. She must have felt so, so terrified.

I hope Charlie will forgive Edward because he‘ll surely hear about that and doubt that he should ever have trusted him… ohhhh boy.

OMG OMG OMG YOU ARE KILLING ME HERE!
Ahhhhhhhh Bella is so smart under pressure!
I‘m sorry, I need to keep this comment short. I must know what‘s happening in the next chapter!

That is so damn creepy! Poor Bella, omg! I hope she calls Edward before opening that door! And I hope Carlisl is well! BITING MY NAILS AGAIN!

That explains so much… Poor Charlie, on his quest to help and protect and bringing justice to the world… What a mess he‘s gotten into!
Now I‘m even more afraid for everyone‘s safety. But your little head‘s up (thank you so, so much for your message!) eased some of my „anxiety“.

I enjoy this story so much. It‘s so difficult to pace myself. Whenever I find the energy to read on, I want to devour it in one sitting, but I‘m so happy with each chapter I read that I‘m trying to spread the happiness. I‘m so proud of me that I didn’t finish it tonight! You can’t believe how much I want to know how it‘s going on. I‘m truly biting my nails here sometimes!
Thank you for yet another great chapter and that I can now start to see the bigger picture!

So many questions are FINALLY answered! But I‘m so incredibly on edge. I‘m afraid you‘ll kill Charlie in the end . Ahhhh I don’t want anyone to die. Should have checked the tags, shouldn’t I? But I‘m too far in now and I want this all to end well!
Thank you for slowly showing us all the pieces and parts to this mystery of a story!

CHARLIE LIVES AND EDWARD KNOWS NOW! Yaaaaaaaaayyyyy!
Omg i was so happy it was Charlie!
That was an awesome reveal!

They are both dead?! But how will Edward and Emmett find out where Charlie is now? Gaaaaahhhhhh poor Charlie!

All of their friendships are so beautiful!
Also, I‘m veeeeeery interested in what that key is for!
Thank you for the chapter :3

I‘m back, sorry, life is challenging. Thank you for another chapter. I love that Emmett didn’t even ask and just dropped anything to come when Edward needed him. They have a beautiful friendship.
Also, we finally know who the big bad boss is! So Aro really is a mafia don?! Omg I don’t see how they‘ll get out of this alive!

That‘s a smart decision on Edward‘s part. Though I feel like he is lying to Bella. First he tells her he‘ll never keep anything from her and then he reveals that he is doing a lot of research he didn’t tell her about…
Let‘s see where this is going…
Thank you for the chapter :)