Reviews for The 5 Steps of Healing
sushicrash777 chapter 1 . 2/5
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Sunshine Spray chapter 3 . 10/30/2021
Oh man! I said it before but I love Vegeta here and how he’s trying to do right by Chi-Chi. I’m keen to see what’s going on with Trunks, not just his relationship to Vegeta but his sister and his best friend as well.

Vegeta’s voicemail to Bulma…omg my heart! /3
PurplePencilWriter chapter 3 . 10/28/2021
Aw. Sad. Hope things get better for everyone. Thanks for sharing!
Sunshine Spray chapter 2 . 10/11/2021
Oh hey, I actually really like this. I’ve always been intrigued by the idea of Vegeta and Chi-Chi as widows and I think the execution has been great so far. I loved how it was Chi-Chi’s helplessness that got Vegeta out of the room. I don’t imagine that he’s always cared much for Chi-Chi but I love the subtleness that he cares for people who care for Chi-Chi. I imagine his feelings toward her will change?

Poor Chi-Chi with Alzheimer’s but it really adds depth to the plot and the characters interactions. As much as the situation is tragic, I really enjoyed the storytelling!
CARO chapter 2 . 10/11/2021
no me imaginaba que chichi estuviera tan enferma , o como goten esta casado con bra, ni que gohan sea capaz de abandonar a su madre asi, solo porque dice verdades incomodas. como se hará amigo vegueta de alguien que a veces esta ahi y otras no?
PurplePencilWriter chapter 2 . 10/9/2021
Good job. Very sad but hopefully things get better for them.
PurplePencilWriter chapter 1 . 10/7/2021
Just a thought. For the people in dragonball world that are fighters and can produce energy blasts... When they need a light they can always use a ball of ki like a candle

Sad thought but if you notice in your story both Chichi and Vegeta have a child that looks like their dead spouse.

Thanks for sharing your writing with us.