Reviews for The Inventor's Legacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "The Inventor's Legacy" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some dope characters for your stories with in a good price that would be my honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm. Discord: jasminelucas12 Instagram: jasmineluc_official |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus it’s been five months since i commented…. Sad, sad times. If you ever come back to this website, im curious to know what happened to your royal road story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I tried to get through the current material, and I'll be honest - it started getting difficult after chapter 15 or so. The pacing is rough and the dialogue, while written well, is just too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two months. Ive lost hope. Good bye i guess. I hope you have a good life. Bruhda out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awh where's Daedalus |
![]() ![]() ![]() im sorry theres no "shaping up" possible of the bronze regiment... jesus the fact their even alive is a wonder |
![]() ![]() ![]() For all daedalus is intelligent, he is also so very conveniently idiotic. Not telling Percy about the prophecy, when hes about to meet Luke, and their on the titans side? Thats negotiating power he is forsaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And thats why you always go for a killing blow against clear enemies. Mark should have been dead before the fight started |
![]() ![]() Are you Rick Riordan's burner account. This is ridiculously accurate to the tone of the books. |
![]() ![]() I love the first person POV as well, Percy Jackson fics without it just don't feel right. |
![]() ![]() You have such a gift for fleshing out characters. It is really special that I feel choked up when andi dies given that she was never in the books and we've known her in this story for only a few chapters. Please keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent, truly. |
![]() ![]() This story is so fun and entertaining, it baffles me as to how it has only 500 favourites only. Not saying that 500 is low, just that it deserves to be way higher |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very good set of chapters, I always enjoy this story and its great to be back reading it. Looking forward future chapters now with more olympiad and mains characters coming in |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story and very impressed with its quality. Best wishes on your future! |