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I like the chapter, but admittedly I have no love for the Black Zetsu parts. Kind of skim over that honestly. I am interested in future interactions with the Straw Hats. Lastly even though I know it is necessary to nerf Naruto, the dude has limiters within limiters. It's like his own haki is trying to merc him on a cellular level. Personally, I would think a seal that allows him to switch between chakra and haki until Vegapunk stabilizes him would be best, so he isn't suffering every time he uses chakra to a certain level. However, that idea means there is no urgency or need to tie him to the Purelands plot nor effectively nerf him for One Piece characters to have a chance. With the exception of Imu, the Five Elders, Emperors, Legendary Weapons, and special beings like King no one would be able to stand against Naruto.

The chapter was overall very enjoyable. It was nice to see the straw hats. Nami going for gold in that manner with vivi being the sick one felt wrong. to be honest with you, every time i see (read) about the convoluted antagonist plot/schemes with otsutsuki and black zetsu shit i have basically no care for those parts. i just have zero interest for it and would rather just focus on only one piece related content. its even worse with Naruto constantly dying or being half dead while already being heavily restricted. i believe you already stated you have plans and dont want to change things regarding otsutsuki/black zetsu, but i think it's probably the biggest hindrance to the story so far along with Naruto constantly being half dead. it gets a little tiresome to read the same thing over and over. keep up the good work because overall, it's still interesting ignoring the parts i dont like.

looks good for a new chapter. cant wait to see the Alabasta Civil War with some New World players on the board. cos crocodile did take up a Shichibukai position due to losing in the New World

The story is heating up now! I noticed your writing is improving way more than the earlier chapters for sure. Good to finally see Naruto's Crew and Luffy's Crew meet up, though Nami getting chewed out like that was pretty mean, though she deserved it for stealing haha.
Why do I get the feeling that Naruto will one day have to eat that chakra fruit? The way he is currently, he is just no match for most enemies he has to eventually fight, especially with Black Zetsus show of force here, dude is a monster for sure. Hope things keep on improving for you R8handman, we appreciate your continued work and the rewriting of earlier chapters. Have a good holiday season homie!

You want a reaction? Hm? I fucking love your story. The fact to integrate both elements of both worlds is in my opinion so flawless. Usually I'm not a huge fan of OCs, which I assum Musasabi is, but I think he's so fucking cool. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the set up for Kara and the threats from Naruto's world affecting this one is just so cool to read. We have Hidan, Black Zetsu, Musasabi, Jigen, and etc to worry about. If I keep going, I'm just gonna keep glazing so yah!

Can’t believe I’m reviewing so keep writing peak fiction, LOL.

so naruto got a new prototype arm and landed in drum kingdom at the same time as luffy.
and looks kureha will help for naruto little haki-chakra problem.
also it seems hidan is also close to the island and zetsu noticed it. damn he seems really powerful, naruto really need his problem solved soon, to finally use and mix haki with chakra at full potential without drawback anymore.
Also ask who really is musasabi, maybe a future or alternate naruto? since musasabi is the name of jiraiya book naruto.

Bit miffed about the time it takes for Naruto to be healthy again, seems like there's always another issue for him, but overall the chapter was enjoyable, and I'm looking forward to the next one!

Epic chapter keep it up!

I loved it, good chapter.

There have been 2 big changes in this chapter. The first was that it seems Vivi was the one who got sick and that is bad because we all know how stubborn and naive the princess is, so she shouldn't have told the boys about her illness, so the chances of them being able to save her in time were very low. Luckily, Naruto was there to make a quick trip to the doctor's castle.

The second change is the feeling of helplessness that all the Straw Hats felt when they were faced with an individual who greatly outweighed them in power. That would happen when they met Aokiji and he froze Robin and Luffy.
The good thing is that there was no fight. The bad thing is that Hidan is apparently approaching Naruto.

By the way, do you think that because of Naruto's presence, Luffy decides to become even stronger? Maybe meeting Naruto made a big impact on the cheerful rubber boy.

Do you think Yamato will tell Zoro that Naruto is not only a swordsman, but that he also forges swords?

About Jiren, sorry, I got confused, I meant Ishiki.

awesome work on this chapter :)

Awesome work please continue the story it's incredible your doing great work please continue the story

You shouldnt have introduced the mindwipe jutsu if you aarent ever gonna use it when it qctually matters

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