|Reviews for Vunerable|
| mizukimarr910 chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
hey i really liked this you kind of scared me there with the run away bride bit but it had a great ending. please keep writing and update again soon.
| nat452 chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
man i love this story
ive read it bout 10 times
please would you write a sequal to tis coz i want to knw what hppns know that they are married
| Oroma chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
you deserve an award! wonderful story, a sequel would be like icing on top of a cake - very much welcome!
keep up the good work.
| LiZzIe31 chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
YES A SEQUEL PLEAZE PLEAZE PLEAZE PLEAZE!
Like da others sed, sum small errors, but hey- i can't spell at all!
Brill- write more more more- M/L, NOT Alec!
| Jayme chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
This was good, it was a good idea. Try proofreading next time, or if you can't find any mistakes, i'd be happy to beta! Sequel please!
| em chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
There's an l in 'vulnerable'. j
Just thought you should know.
| Anoymous chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
I liked the ideas expressed in this story but there are far too many grammer mistakes. just fix the grammer and it will be way better. other then that it's good..keep up the writing..don't stop now
| Angel chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL! That story was so good!
| Mystic25 chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
nice..sweet..but not TOO sweet
| Mariana1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
sequel? Hell yes!
It's so sweet! M/L 4eva!
| freya chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
THIS IS NOT MY STORY- I'M POSTING IT FOR SOMEONE ELSE COS THEIR FILE IS NOT WORKING- E-MAIL THE ADDRESS AT THE TOP OF THE STORY FOR REVIEWS- THANKS.
| Missy chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
that was a good story. although the story has been done before and certain sections of the story are exactly the same as other M/L stories here. can i just say though you need to take a little extra time on your next story. you had numerous spelling, grammar and sentence problems, that really let your story down. you should try and get someone to beta it next time because a lot of them were really silly little mistakes. i don't say this to make you feel bad and i am sorry if i made u feel that way. but i feel as though had you not had these silly fixable mistakes your story would have been so much better. i hope you do write a sequel and i look forward to reading it.
| BlackWolf chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Very nice, a lot of stuff thrown in, but it was executed very well.
| agmgdafan chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
Very good story. I really would like to read a sequel.
| MaxCale chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
i love it yes more please please