The timeline is on the Rick Riordan fandom page. It's not a big issue, but just he swore he would find a way home and isn't utilizing all his resources (The history isn't important, but being able to call upon the knowledge of a godess, or at least knowledge of Egyption Magic is). It's still a great story, and I don't care about anything canon that happens after the divergent, and this detail is tiny, but it still bothered me enough to post a review.

why didnt Percy kill Ozai?
And please Percy x Azula x Ty lee

Ah fuck I kind of forgot what my prediction was but I think I thought that Azula was going to get a moment where she has to pick between her father and Percy but still unfortunately choose the fire lord to show he still has his claws in her/show off that team save Azula still has ways to go or that Ozai was going to figure out she cares about Percy (and viceversa) and then use her as a hostage and kind of show that underneath he is a coward in the face of defeat. Idk it's been a while but I think that's what it was

Loved it perfect as always keep the updates coming

I love the story, but I still don't see how you have the pairing as azula and percy when they're still not together and on opposite sides of the war. hopefully that won't just be and ending like here they are and we're done with the story...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
YAY!
NO!
COnfUSED GroANS
This is so good!
I was kinda wondering how you were gonna get Percy out of there without straight-up killing Ozai, but you managed. Well done indeed! I like how the only thing that could've gotten Percy out of a rage-state was someone put in the way of danger; Percy's a real hero. XD
NOOO HAKODA!
Even though I've already seen the ATLA series, and I feel SOMEWHAT confident you left Hakoda alive, I don't know, and I hope so. XD Gosh I hope so.
Keep up the great work! :D

Azula is conflicted.

Excellent chapter

This is really good! Excited to see the next chapter and Azula’s reaction to everything

Aggggggggghhhhh ok i love that Ozai was getting his ass pretty much Handed to him...but im scared for Azula after that, Ozai is the kind of person to blame his loss on the fact that Azula didn't kill Percy before he got there so he'll probably treat her even worse now. while that may cause her separation from his sooner, she doesn't deserve that treatment. ugggh you got me both excited and worried! great work as always, and I'll catch you next time.

I mean yes they lost the battle but at the same time they've completely crippled the capital of the fire nation and eliminated a large portion of the 'home guard' as it were giving them a supreme advantage in the overall war.
Nice chapter, keep it up

Brilliant chapter, always fun to see Percy kick the butt of large armies and people like Ozai. But there were some parts that confused me. Obviously it changed quite a bit with most of the adults escaping, but how many warships or balloons did Percy destroy? Because it wasn’t very clear and from what I remember the fire nation had a couple dozen warships and a few balloons in the show

Dude I was literally just thinking about when the update was coming like an hour ago xD! Awesome timing and terrific quality as always! Love where the plot is going and how the character development is still holding strong for both Percy and Azula, keep it up!

... what the hell... all that build up, Percy finally going all out all for nothing. Percy's a demigod, the strongest demigod to ever live, by the end of the chapter he's standing right next to the sea there's no reason for him to even think they lost his power's are essentially limitless with the sea at his back, that moment with Ozai, with how angry Percy was it's also extremely weird to me that he suddenly just stopped, Annabeth isn't there, she isn't there to anchor him, she's gone. This entire chapter, it just seem's contrived so the Original Plot of the show can continue onwards, Ozai should be dead, those fire nation soidler's should be dead, I don't know if I'm just missing something or something but it is just incredible unsatisfying.

Again I could be missing something, there could be more to this entire chapter that I'm just not seeing but if there is I genuinely blind to it, it's just left me confused.

If Estelle is yet to be born, then this happens slightly before the first book the the Trials of Apollo. Therefore, it happened after the Crown of Ptolemy, which was during the Summer. Unless you are completely ignoring the Kane Chronicles, Percy can draw upon the imprint of the thousands of years of history left by his time with Nekbet. But he is not, so you are ignoring some of Canon for this fiction. If you pretend the Kane Chronicles crossovers never happened, then the problem with Setne never gets resolved. If you pretend the main series never happened, it becomes plausible, but you would have to edit many minor details.